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| jkrhaterhplover 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseWow! ^_^ That was rather lovely. I have to say that captured Ron pretty well in my mind at least? Well done, but somehow you should make a sequel where hes at the Burrow using them while everyone is out and Hermione hears him when he thinks noone is home. Or vice versa Hermione finds them in Ron's room and thinks to borrow one? And is sucked into a uncontrollable daydream driven by her hidden thoughts and feelings of Ron? Then somehow make a third spinoff where the treats lead them to each other? haha im a thinker i guess? think about it love your a good writer. |
| fanficfan1037 2007-11-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseR... hahaha! I like it! and so do my friggin teenage hormones! |
| Silver Weasley 2006-12-29 ch 1, | abuseoh, boy. now THAT is what i call a good story. best patented daydream story i've ever read, i was cracking up throughout the entire thing. "He looked up again to see Hermione laughing and pointing at Krum, and holding up a sign that said ‘Vicky is a Grouchy Git and a Terrible Kisser!’" that realy got me going, as well as cormac getting hit with the beater's bat, the four-part harmony of weasley is our king, and hermione going all fangirl on ron hahaha. and of course, the writing was brilliant, the dialogue and characterization were spot on, and i loved the fact that ron was starting to mature a little with his whole take on lavender and how he didn't just want hermione so he could kiss her, he wanted her because she was HER. i'm off to go read hermione's daydream--should be as excellent as ron's. cheers, sw |
| Jubileyn 2006-06-26 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant! Now if they only get together for real... XD |
| ifyoulovemeyou'llkillthattr... 2006-04-08 ch 1, | abuseawesome i'll add u to my favorite authors list...but i still kick ** ;) lmao |
| ForgetFairyTales 2006-02-25 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant! |
| kiss-of-cuteness 2006-02-12 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this one-shot. The whole Ron Hermione missed moments series is awesome. |
| aruora 2005-11-20 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat fic to bad it ended so soon lol. would be great if you add more chapters to it though. i hope you do |
| Possum132 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abuseAh, if only JKR would put THAT into the books! Most enjoyable. |
| SugarQuill Cutie 2005-11-04 ch 1, | abuseLMAO. really nice idea. so orginal and awesome! OH that ron *wink* nice job! |
| Waltz Alone 2005-10-29 ch 1, | abuseaw this is so cute yet... SEXY! lol. The Hermione versiuon was less hot... but this one was just like, WOW! lol XD good job! |
| potter7 2005-10-29 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was sweet but eeww lol |
| Missing a Member 2005-10-14 ch 1, | abusesick. u r a perv. a perv who writes really good stories. i hate you. goob job! |
| Crookshanks22 2005-10-09 ch 1, | abuseVery witty, very clever. I enjoyed how thoroughly you explored various aspects of Ron's character (such as his Quidditch insecurities and his opinion of Fred and George)-- setting the romantic and sexual content in a balanced context makes it so much more convincing. |
| LiTTleMiSSmOOny 2005-10-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was bloddy brilliant! Loved it! I laughed so hard I almost fell off my chair! Keep up the awesome work! |