I liked this alot. Very good and dramatic, this is really your style of writing. Keep up the great work.

I liked the alternate ending.. Not many people thnk of that kind of stuff

it totally didnt' need the kiss, that's how great the scene was already. great job!

:) that was good :)

The kissing scene wasn't OOC, at least, I don't think it was. Very sweet, now we all know where Hermione went during the Yule Ball, and that Dramione really DOES exist...

;P

you know what, i actually prefer the previous one (without the kiss). i know, i can't believe it either!! but that was amazing. you would've left the readers wondering about the what ifs, the should haves and if onlys!

especially with that whole “I would have said that you looked lovely tonight Hermione, and I would have asked you to save me a dance.” thing.

you could make more from it. realy!

I love it. Sadly Ms. Rowling wouldn't put them together for some odd reason she thought that Hermione was better suited with Ron. Keep up the good work.

OH MY GOD. THAT WAS SIMPLY FANTABULISTICALLY SUPERB. Pleasse do more of this. And by 'this' I mean elaborating on the little Hermione/Draco snippets of the books. Okay? Thanks. =]

this is so good.. i love the Yule ball

very awesome. I love your writing style, by the way :)

loved it. i always loved that scene in the movie, always felt bad for mione.

love the story... :p

Heh.
Nice one.
Like the text reference(s). Hm, maybe ask JR if she'd like to add those bits in?

Well, I liked it. Wish there was more, but hey, if wishes were blueberry pies, I would've died from indigestion (and gluttony, apparently, it's a sin, or so I hear) by now...
I always wondered what ol' Draky was doing during this time... but no jealousy? Tres gaspish.

...:)

I really liked that story It showed a different side of Malfoy Good writing

That is so dam good!