Reviews for Don't Mess with My Manager

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ANIME WOLF K 2008-06-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseAlright I have to admit that was good fanfic. but a little short.although you nailed the characters! I mean some people just write whatever but you actually put Hiruma and Mamori in character! Awesome on the whole and keep writing! GO HIRUMAMO!
sparkling-saphyre 2008-02-11 ch 1,	abuseI JUST LOVED HOW WE WRITTERS PLAY THE ROLE OF THE CHARACTERS TO FIT IN OUR STORY... YOU DID GREAT WRITE MORE
Tatsumaki-sama 2007-08-30 ch 1,	abuseHiruma's line to Muro was the greatest. He's so protective of Mamori. I love him so much.
Castanalia Miow 2007-07-25 ch 1,	abuseCool,sappy story with hints of romances.Hopes there more from it came from.:P
Scrunchy 2007-01-24 ch 1,	abuseNice... Hiruma was nicely in character, and the way you played it out was great!
charms 2006-11-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseaw!! I LOVE HIRUMA!! hope u make more stories :D
Snake of Medusa 2006-09-18 ch 1,	abuseWha? Why is Satoshi still alive? And phisically (sp?) unharmed?!? Dammit, Hiruma should have knocked his halfway across the school... Anywho, this was a really good fic, I liked how the characters weren't overly sappy ('get your own manager...' Priceless!) and the plot was well thought out; more chapters would have been nice, but this was a very good oneshot! Thank you for writing such wonderfulness and for doing it w/ punctuation and proper grammar; I've lost count of the fics I've read w/horrible punctuation and stuff like that...it drives me crazy! (not really, if it gets too bad I just go back) I'll go now!
Elektra3 2006-09-14 ch 1,	abuseNice! Hiruma/Mamori is my OTP, and I liked the way you wrote them. My only criticism is that Hiruma probably wouldn't have left it at "get your own *' manager" - he'd probably have included at least a minor threat to make sure that it didn't happen again. But other than that, this was a really good story. goes to check out your other fics*
ShinjucAt 2006-08-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is adoable,this is romantic-ish, and this was certainly worth the effort youput into it. If you make another HiruMamoI'll surely read it.
tuRtl3bOy 2006-05-20 ch 1,	abusei swear, it takes me forever to sign in...anyway, only one word to describe your story...Awesome. nods head yep, simply awesome. I loved it. it's going on my favorites! Hehe...
Holly 2006-04-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseHope you add more short fics to this section. I LOVE the way you portray the possible Hiruma/Mamori relationship. You pull it off the BEST!
astig3422 2006-02-25 ch 1,	abuseaw so cute!love it!!well i thought it woul be better if it wasn't oneshot but still it's cute!!
Crash 2006-01-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou...Rock...T_T Write some more stuff like this! ^_^ Yay HiruMamo!
Chranze 2005-12-28 ch 1,	abuseI completely agree with you! Loved your fic!!
Aki-Chan 2005-11-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseaaw how cute (wouldnt Hiruma love to kill me for saying that) and to think usally i hate Mamori but i think shes rubbing off on me please write more soon! ^_^

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