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SuckUpDuck
2008-05-18 . chapter 2
"Abra Kedabra; pull a white rabbit out of a seemingly empty black hat.
Watch them clap, and then wonder why you can’t pull doves out, instead."

Just when I thought the story couldn't get any better, you finished it up with a PERFECT ending.

Oh, you made me LIKE Snape. And that's remarkable really. You're great! xD

I think what I like this fic is that it isn't the ilikeyouyoulikemeletsfallinloveandhaveahappyfamily type of fic that's ever so multiplying in this site. You have DEPTH, and I think that's what makes everything you write so wonderful. :)
jekodama
2008-02-24 . chapter 2
Why don't you like it? I think the main premise is quite interesting.
jekodama
2008-02-24 . chapter 1
Oh, Holy...

Draco has an eating disorder, Harry believes Snape, and I'm SO EXCITED because my copy of Harry Potter and The Deathly Hallows arrives tomorrow (I read it in English and now I'm getting it in Spanish).

Did I tell you I love how you write? No? well, I LOVE HOW YOU WRITE!
Alexa Johnson
2006-12-18 . chapter 2
What a lovely story!

I love all your characterizations, and am thrilled to death you didn't write postHBP!Snape as an Evil Bastard who killed Dumbledore because he was completely loyal to the Dark Lord. I especially love how you've portrayed Hermione--I can sort of identify with her insecurities, and you manage to keep her in character without her whining about them.

I'm intrigued with the way you've written Draco, and am eager to see more of him! I realize this fic hasn't been updated in some time, but I really hope you have not abandoned it!
I love your writing and really hope you continue!

Cheers,
Alexa
j;eoawijnn
2006-08-11 . chapter 2
I am a huge fan of all your stories. There's just some quality about your style of writing that draws people in. I can't explain it. Your angst is wonderful, and your sense of humor is sharp, and just...Awesome. I love it! Please do continue.
queenofthelameos
2006-02-18 . chapter 2
well this is new and exciting. continue please!
Lrnd
2005-11-28 . chapter 2
wicked cool story, please add more chappies ... and chappies can mean boys as well ;p
Vengeful
2005-11-20 . chapter 2
Still too soon to decide if it is going to be a great story, but thus far it seems to be headed in that direction. I look forward to reading more, as you have an excellent writing style.
Grace
2005-10-30 . chapter 2
I don't know where to start to tell you what I love about this story. So, I'll just say I like it all, the characterization, the emotion, everything.
Sunny
2005-09-29 . chapter 2
This is actualy a quite interesting story...I really love that its post hbp...your story is very good...I like it...so please update soon cuz I need to ho its gonna turn out!
Em
2005-09-18 . chapter 2
Loving this so far, great characterisation. You're doing a great job of fleshing out characters without making them ooc...really looking forward to were you take this.
(also loving the fact you obviously like Ron despite this being a dr/hr so many Dramione fanfics butcher Ron )
PLEASE DELETE ACCOUNT
2005-09-01 . chapter 2
I like this fic a lot. Especially the poetic italics that you have at the end. I can almost see this playing out of the corner of my eye. I really like the imagery you use -- not only in this fic, but all your fics. I'm surprised your stories are overlooked because they are fantastic. I loved your one-shots. Your style is very unique and different. I like it a lot. This fic is a fresh change from all the other ones out there. I'm glad you haven't abandoned the ship after HBP.

I look forward to the next update.

- k
arctique48
2005-08-24 . chapter 2
Okay. It is official. I am one hundred percent in love with your writing. Your portrayal of EVERYONE is perfect. P-E-R-F-E-C-T.

"Snape wasn’t cynical. He was brutally honest." Sorry, that line made me giggle. A man after my own heart.

"She wasn’t real-life-smart, because a real-life-smart person wouldn’t be in love with her best friend and wouldn’t have a walking target as her other best friend and wouldn’t spend nights suffering like an insomniac, dwelling on all her imperfections of body and character." This entire section was brilliant. Perfect even. You managed to bring out Hermione's insecurities in a way that didnt consitute her whining about how Ron didnt love her. And her reasons for not dancing with Ron... It was so different from anything i've seen anyone else write and it was so TRUE. Completely and utterly.

Your characterisations (as always) leave me utterly in awe, you've made them people, even Snape and i am very difficult to please on the matter of Snape. (The section about the tattoo was wonderful, though sadly my warped imagination saw it in far more graphic detail than i'm really comfortable with...)

"Abra Kedabra; pull a white rabbit out of a seemingly empty black hat.
Watch them clap, and then wonder why you can’t pull doves out, instead."

There is something about the end lines in all your fics/chapters/writings. They really leave such a strong impact. I really love it, you leave thinking about something you really didnt expect to (and i mean really Thinking. Capiltalised and everything). At first it just seems like a cool parallel and then you look closer and O_o it is just SO real. So human. So like people.

But yus. Everything you write make such painful SENSE, and your writing has this wonderful easy style to it that almost contradicts the dark undertones of what's written. I love it. I really, really do. *Thank ye much* and update soon!
tea and frangipani
2005-08-23 . chapter 2
I really like the way you write. I don't know, it just kinda flows. I hope you update soon.
Artemis
2005-08-21 . chapter 1
hey, you really are good! first i read 'whiplash', which was amazing, and now this! i shall be waiting for you to update.
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