I like the idea of your series, but your characterization is way off. First of all, Alice would never get pregnant with Kyo BEFORE marriage. The main reason is that Kyo would never rush anything. Also, they would both be in so much trouble with their families if this ever happened. Also, you need to edit your work. There are so many typos and they make it hard to read your story. For example, you said that "Kyo kissed him" when you mean "Frey kissed him". The changes aren't that big but they would make a huge difference. Please get a beta... it would make everything a lot better. Overall, the idea of Darva returning is really good! Keep up the hard work and finish the series, please!

I love the concept of this.Even though there are some spelling and grammar mistakes it's very riveting. Keep it up and hope to read the next chapter!

I really like this story! I just have one question... in the third chapter are you saying taht Alice and Kyo already have twins? I'm just a bit confused... lol Well I can't wait to read more! ~Shealyn

i like this. direct and blunt to the point. no flowery descriptions of settings or characters. i like. fast reading and fast action. good explanations and nice flow. me like. keep writing, plz.

i was going to say that your story is good but...you really need to work on updating more often...

you and Sanci (one of my friends who is an author on here just type in Sanci to find her)are driving me nuts with the cliff hangers!*stats banging head agianst desk*

Aw it's so cute! Alice and Kyo are getting married! Sorry my review sucks, but I don't have much time...Love ya!

please write more I love alice 19th fan fics
yous is the best iv read so far

Wow this one of the best Alice the 19th Fic I've read , ever. Anyway , I wish that you would update plaese.. Yesh Frey is still free, boo that Kyo isn't...
- Amaya ( The one who bit the cymbal)

Wait a go Jo! Pretty interesting fic you got there... as much as I like Frey too thank god I'm not between Abby and Erin trying to get him... my vote... I say they share! Nah... to be nice since Erin has none I'll vote for her... anyhoo keep up the work! Can't wait till they get to Sydney Australia!

I LOVE Your stories! I vote for Abby again too! lol Erin has no votes! Why till chapter eight? lol past lots! I love your story!

very interesting story, update sonn...

I VOTE ABBY TO HAVE FREY! I VOTE MORE THAN ERIN!
Now to the real review...I LOVE IT! Bad Alice! Getting pregnant before her marriage...tisk tisk tisk. lol well I vote Abby again!!