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stareagle
2006-12-21
ch 15,
abuseI discovered your stories by reading a review of someone elses's work - You commented you were in law enforcement and I was curious. What a delightful discovery! I enjoyed this story and the fluffy ending- loved Grissom's arguments with his conscience! Sara's Pink elephant moments were cute, and the lyrics to the song you started with were perfect! I hope you continue to write fanfic. Also becareful when dealing with those nuts you have to work with!
Merry Christmas from the USA
ForensicsFreak1988
2005-10-10
ch 15,
abuseFINALLY! Gris admits it! LOL. Now, if only there were some way to turn this fic into "real" life... Alas, there's not. Can't wait to see if you write something else. Tell you boss you need to write instead of work all day. LOL. That'll go over well.
Charlie Blue
2005-10-08
ch 15,
abuseHey.

Great sweet story, and I hope that's not the end of it, this chapter 15. :-)

Cool that Griss could finally admit his love for her to himself, and to Sara nontheless. After over 10 years. :-D

*About Cliff Richard... He is huge in Denmark, which I call home, but I'm not a fan. I can listend, and find it somewhat good, but nontheless great that you used him in your fic.
Swienegel
2005-09-27
ch 13,
abuseHy Kickascot,

I read throug the 13 chapters wich are now up on your story and I like it.
Its interesting what happens between the two of them and how the team get´s along.

I hope to read more of it ;) I really enyojed it so far, espacilly the part with the CD, that was a really nice idea.

Swienegel
alelopez88
2005-09-24
ch 13,
abuseI liked it!! (especilly the voices inside Grissom's head) It's really cute, please continue...
jtbwriter
2005-09-14
ch 11,
abuseThat was nice-I love that Gris was so gentle with
Sara-and I think she gets it!

Of course Gris is now having second thoughts-but
I think he's so happy Sara's with him he's going
to ignore them! I hope! :)

Thanks for the great update-"stubborn" Sara and all!
Now what?:)
perfectcrime
2005-09-14
ch 11,
abusejust like gone witht the wind! only not quiet. Frankly scarlett I don't give a damn. love that movie and love this story.
ForensicsFreak1988
2005-09-14
ch 11,
abuseAW...I loved the "strong" line. It's so true and actually, honest to god, if Sara and Gris ever get together, that would be part of their conversation. Keep up the good work.
ThatPersonWithAName
2005-09-09
ch 10,
abuseplez up date soon
ForensicsFreak1988
2005-09-09
ch 10,
abuseAww... Really cute. And I LOVE Grissom's inner battles.
jtbwriter
2005-09-06
ch 10,
abuseThat was good-I'm glad Sara finally let it out and
Gris was allowed to comfort her.

She's so stubborn-at least he went for it!

Great update-thanks! Now what?:)
Taletha
2005-09-04
ch 1,
abuseWhoa! This is pretty dramatic. Great start.
perfectcrime
2005-09-01
ch 9,
abuseok, this is uexpected, I kinda thought the story was completed but, no worries, I'll put it on alert. You live in New Zelend? Cool, Where are they in the season there? You mentioned nesting dolls. If you hated that one then you'll hate the next one even more. I won't give it away but pay attention to the end or you'll miss it. Anyway, I love the story and can't wait to see what hapens next. I'm a HUGE GSR fan so thta might help as to why I love this so much, post soon.
ForensicsFreak1988
2005-08-16
ch 8,
abuseI'm really, really, really loving this story. I say you tell your boss that you should write instead of work all day. Think that will go over well? Update as soon as you can.
ForensicsFreak1988
2005-08-16
ch 7,
abuseI haven't finished every thing you have but, I'm loving it so far. New Zealand Rocks, by the way!
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