Loved this story! Beautifully written and great idea for a plot. Please update!

I seriously don't know what to write. It was incredibly realistic. I think you nailed their characters damn near perfectly. Good job.

Really good. I liked it alot. Good premise for a story too. YOu might want to up the rating to M though. Its a little graphic for T.

WOW, this is such a great fic! I can't wait to see how their relationship develops! Very cute and satisfying! Perfect read! Update soon, ya hear?

i loved it...update soon! -adds to faves-

Wow, I am so thoroughly enjoying this story, really great drama. Fab writing too. Update soon! Hx

Wow such a great story. Love it, love it, love it!

It's too bad you decided to put this on hiatus, but I understand how life can be. I hope you get your creative juices back soon, because this is a wonderful story.

Oh wow, I've only just read this story. It's great! I love the way you write Jack and the whole thing is just brilliantly written. Can't wait for more!

I actually cried in this chapter! This was great! I can't wait for the next chapter.

You are an amazing writer, love. Your ideas, your style, everything just flows together so coherently,andthe emotions you portray are immaculate! Thank you for updating this story. I hope everything becomes fine for you, and becomes better. Wonderful writing. I loved Will's innocence compared to the younger, jack.

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Oh. My. God. Oh my god, ohmygod, omg! That was amazing and incredible and thank you so much for updating so soon! Also, I liked how you only briefly mentioned his encounter with Diane. (I hate her!) Wow. I'm not sure there's much else to say. You have an amazing talent for writing, and I can totaly see that having happened if things in the '80s had been just a little different. Great job of keeping everyone in character. Fabulous. Update soon?! Please!

wow. this is a wonderful fic. and i beg you! update!
fel the guilt...

Oh please oh please oh please update! (gr...I already HATE Diane with a passion...Jack should be Will's first...)

Why aren't you updating?! I L.O.V.E. this story, it has been THE inspiration to start writing one myself, and now you're not updating any more? I need to know how it is going to end! I want Jack to go after Will and stop him from making the worst mistake of his life! (sleeping with Diane) I need an update NOW! PLEASE! This story is too good to end it here! I love it how you display the two of them, if they weren't really like that in the past I will eat my shoe (the left one) Just take time, write the next chapter and release us all from waiting. Your story is one of the very few stories I read over and over again. Please update! I love it so much.