 The Lazy Princess 5/22/12 . chapter 21Wow,...poor Neville... Harry was amazing...felt sad about Violet ... James, Sirius and Remus, Peter... good fic...really enjoyed till the end |
 anon 5/20/12 . chapter 21 Thank you for writing this, I enjoyed reading it. As always, pacing can never be perfect. |
 illicit.azure 5/11/12 . chapter 5I adore this! I'd have read this in one go if only I wasn't so sleepy. taa! |
 narutojazz19 5/9/12 . chapter 1Wow great first chapter! |
 AllShadesOfGrey 4/22/12 . chapter 20Oh, I completely forgot to mention that I loved Violet with all of my heart.
She had her imperfections and problems, her downsides and her pros.
Definitely the most perfect OC I've ever read - perfect in the sense. She wasn't flawless, and she wasn't a Mary Sue *wrinkles nose in distaste* She wasn't the hero rushing off to save everyone, she wasn't the all-knowing girl with flawless plans, no, she was a loving sister who tried her best to help.
Kudos to you for creating an amazing OC! (: Phenomenal job... again.
Grey |
 AllShadesOfGrey 4/22/12 . chapter 21That was amazing. It was so tragic, confusing, sweet, heart wrenching, and beautifully written.
I'm still crying. The last 3 chapters had tears silently streaming down my cheeks.
...There were so many words, such long chapters, it took me about two weeks to finally finish.
This was a really marvelous piece of work. The alternate universe was simply magnificent; it was completely and totally believable.
Violet was a great character. In fact, everyone was. Neville was phenomenal. If he really was The Boy Who Lived, JK Rowling probably would've characterized him just like this. Neville would definitely be the type to be easily taken advantage of and easily manipulated.
Wow. I barely have words for this. It was really good.
I was SO nervous in that middle section that Harry really HAD killed Remus, Ginny, Luna, and Ron. Thank goodness it wasn't so.
James and Lily were perfect.
I couldn't ask for anything better as a reader. You did a crazily amazing job with the story.
...Still crying.
You have such a way with words. They draw out so many emotions from me- I cried, laughed, smiled, gasped, bit my nails in nervousness, raged, and applauded. I haven't read a story that's done that in a while.
Amazing work of art, again. Thanks so much for posting it up on ff.n for me and others to read. It was a pleasure. (:
Grey |
 Nagineus 4/22/12 . chapter 1Awesome plot! Though I admit I was disappointed when the whole thing ended off with being a dream - kinda wished it was a real AU, till I realise - hey, these people, the wonderful people you created, Violet, Peter, James, Lily are as real as can be. So kudos to you, for being able to pull it off so well! Thanks for the amazing read! |
 Nadia 4/22/12 . chapter 21 This story was awesome. That's all I can say - I really have no words to describe it :). Thanks so much for writing it and allowing me to read it, you did a fantastic job. :D |
 CatgirlKitsune 4/14/12 . chapter 4Sigh I'm too much of a SiriusxHarry slash fan. XD During all the interaction between the two I couldn't help but imagine preslashy goodness. LMAO Specialy the last part where Harry was studying Sirius. AUGHHH I'm gonna die! |
 NightWithMoon 4/12/12 . chapter 15Hmm. I read some of this story before, but only got a few chapters in when I stopped reading (at the time I think I was rather disappointed in the magic duels in this story - not very impressive). This time, however, I've managed to read much farther... and now I have to stop because I really hate it when people drag ghosts and whatnot to play god in stories... It feels too much like cheating and makes the characters look too pathetic... |
 Smozzick 4/12/12 . chapter 21I loved the character of Violet. I actually cried when it seemed like she would be gone forever and at the end in the last chapter.
Great use of characterisation for all of the characters but mostly her; she was easily the most likeable Original Character I've ever read about. |
 HarryHEARTHermione 3/28/12 . chapter 21I risked reading this story. I'm an HHR shipper and i'm glad that it didn't focus on HG romantic relationship much. Even though I was hurt some part. Your Hermione version in the dream is awfully portrayed. Sorry. But still you should have put Harry P./Neville L. instead of Harry and James since its their destiny we were talking of. I love Violet though, i just hope you develop her relationship with Neville more. Neville deserves it I think even though it was all in Harry's mind. Anyway, about the horcrux, nice way to make the hidden place written originally and didn't based it on the original book. I salute you for that. Harry seems bitter with his spirit mother Lily when they first met. I feel kinda sorry for her. Hehe.
Anyways, quite enjoyed reading your story all in all. Good job.
-Zha |
 captainwhiteshadow 3/27/12 . chapter 21This is the greatest and most well written Harry Potter fic I've ever read! Kudos and favs D |
 Jogibr 3/26/12 . chapter 17 "Ginny. That's a nice name. Short for Virginia?"
"Ginevra, actually."
You deserve a fucking medal for this line. |
 Dr34ming 3/11/12 . chapter 21I can't believe you pulled of the 'and it was all a dream' ending, and especially that I didn't want to punch the computer for it. The ending was beautiful and felt real and emotional, like the rest of the story, which flowed brilliantly. The plot is really original, and I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks for occupying a few hourse of my time! :D |