 irezel 2009-11-15 . chapter 21this was an incredible story...you successfully made the really sad scenes believable...and i CRIED! well...that isn't really hard to DO but...yeah...:D really touching and you wrapped it up really well...:) great job! |
 darksidhe42 2009-11-03 . chapter 21Wow. It started off a little slow, but once it got rolling, it was like a freight train. Fantastic story. It made me laugh and cry. The characters were very IC... very cannon. I like the way your AU took one change and followed everything to it's logical result. I wish more AU stories did that. Thank you for sharing. |
 FTW20142 2009-10-29 . chapter 21Bloody awesome story! The last few chapters had a different tone to it. But those were the chapters that made the whole story great. |
 MrsHellman 2009-10-29 . chapter 21That was a great story with a great end ;] I nearly stopped reading when Lily died, I was so freaking mad, but I continued, and it was worth it :]
~mi |
 VampireDelight 2009-10-15 . chapter 21This story was amazing. I am about to say something cliche... Words cannot describe what I just read. It was a bit of a mind-fuck, but it was a great idea. The ending was sad, perfect, but sad. It almost makes me want to cry, actually. Thank you. |
 leona-the-critic 2009-10-07 . chapter 21Good, but a bit bizarre. |
 reflex 2009-10-03 . chapter 21I like the idea it is very original, showing that death is only the beginning of the new adventure was a very nice touch. |
 Afterburn Tango 2009-09-23 . chapter 21Damn it. Now you've gone and done it. You've made me cry. Esh, it's just so bloody sweet and potent, with the ending wrapping it all up in pretty packaging and a nice bow.
Not, y'know, bawling like a babe or anything... cause.. that'd be decidedly unmanly. But uhm... tears?
Yes, anyway. This whole story has been a wonderful creation that I've enjoyed from start to finish. Extremely well written and marvelously executed. Even better, it was unique to my knowledge. I've come across the dreams and alternate universes and such, but this is the first time I've stumbled upon this particular twist. It was extremely enjoyable.
I haven't seen your authors page yet, but I sincerely hope to find other fiction there that are just as, if not more so, enjoyable. |
 MissyMoJo 2009-09-19 . chapter 1Interesting choice of a reaction, for Harry. I've seen this done so many times, I've noted all the different reactions. Your's isn't completely unknown, I've seen it before. But I more often see a stronger angrier disbelief. I think I prefer the angry reaction more, but I can beliebe the shock, too. I can't Help but like the, "How dare you!" reaction. Angry that anyone would pull such a cruel "prank?".
One question, is Harry going to explain himself, honestly? I go nuts when he tries to hide it for too long. Though I admit, its the more canon thing for him to hide the truth. |
 Silver Sailor Ganymede 2009-09-19 . chapter 21I remember reading this story years ago, but for some reason I never got to the end of it. I really liked this way this turned out. It's completely different to all the other 'Neville is the Boy Who Lived' stories that I've read. I loved Violet - normally people will write Harry's sister as being extremely Mary-Sueish, but Violet was a very human character and she honestly seemed like a sister that Harry really could have had. Nice work, I really enjoyed reading it. |
 kiki 2009-09-17 . chapter 21 Well done. I loved it! |
 Arkadius Demarnacron 2009-09-16 . chapter 21Beautiful work, I enjoyed every bit of it as I stayed up far past any reasonable time one should be in bed to read this, I can only hope to see another story like this going soon that captures me like this one has. |
 tinkita 2009-09-11 . chapter 21Fantastic story! |
 A Bibliophile 2009-09-05 . chapter 12Go Draco! Yes, in canon he is often a git, but he has so much potential awesomeness that gets put in fanfics I can't help but love him. |
 A Bibliophile 2009-09-05 . chapter 9Hermione's patronus memory brought back some bad memories... |