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| Dragen Eyez 2008-05-17 ch 1, | abusePoor Yamino...having to deal with a drunken father... Interesting take on how the detective business began...and I love the final bit... What a painful reminder for the now child-god... Pretty women that he can no longer have |
| Draculina17 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abuseIs this just a one shot? Or a continuation? Anywho, I loved it! |
| Galadriel Caskett 2005-09-04 ch 1, | abuseit WAS a tiny bit OOC. Now, I *seriously* can't imagine Loki-kun drinking himself into obliviousness. Ahaha, he's always so in control of things, that well... And cursing? Debonair Loki? *gasps* But it was fun. Lol. Write more! ^_^ |
| sushi girl 2005-08-12 ch 1, anon. | abusemm, i rather liked it. and it was rather injoyable. i really liked any part with yamino. please write more with him involved. yamino needs love. lol |
| MiKKa-CHaN 2005-07-30 ch 1, anon. | abusenice, please dont' forget to update soon.. (I'm too lazy to log in...) |
| pheecat 2005-07-29 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this; it was another side of Loki, one I'd never thought about (how he felt when he was first exiled.) I hope you'll write more MLR stories! Thanks for an enjoyable read. |
| Ruby-dream 2005-07-29 ch 1, | abuseKYA!^^ At first, Loki is a bit harsh I guess, but I love it when he met Mayura! :D I like this fic! Long live MayuraXLoki! XD |
| Earth Star 2005-07-29 ch 1, | abuseThis was very cute! Seeing that Loki was getting use to his new situation, I would say he's in character. Nice work! |