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Reviews For: A Fine Line

Newbie GK
2007-12-21
ch 1,
abuseAnother amazing story. That last line was so powerful; wonderful job.
Dybdahl
2007-10-31
ch 1,
abuseAnd now I'm slightly depressed.
ionawolfrider
2006-01-29
ch 1,
abuseA vary nicely writen story. Almost like anyone would feel with a partner or a family member that went. Really I don't think you need a follow up with this one. That is inless you feel like more tears?
Earllyn
2005-09-30
ch 1,
abuse'grabs tissue' This was so sad and so good! Very well written!
moonlightfaery
2005-07-31
ch 1,
abuseaw that was really sweet :D are you going to write a sequel?

sophee
xoxox
csiAngel
2005-07-31
ch 1,
abuseOh I love angst, and this was a great piece of angst. A nice angle to take it from, and such a moving conclusion.
AussieGal
2005-07-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseUH! Thats so sad! And I know it was meant to be but now I'm almost in tears. lol. Now I want to know how he died. Feel like writing a follow up please?
Admiral Lily
2005-07-29
ch 1,
abuseWow. I mean, wow. I know we don't like one word reviews (I guess I've passed that point now. :D), but I'm feeling a little speechless. Is this the angsty one you warned me was coming? If so, I definitely see the indecision about adding more or not, cuz . . . wow. :D

Touching and sad yet beautiful. Good job. And the title was oh so adequate.

AL
Hazeydream
2005-07-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseWas very angsty but a brilliant, beautiful angsty story. Loved it!!
johnliz4ever
2005-07-29
ch 1,
abuseI've already reviewed on LJ but I wanted to do it again because this fic is great. It's one of my favs.
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