I'm so happy to see Battle Athletes fanfiction! I think this anime is really underrated in the femslash fanfic world, believe me I've looked for it. Cute story you've written. Bummer for Akari though, I mean she dies before she gets either of her girls, and then they go for each other (not that she'd have a problem with that by the time they'll all be together again). Anyway, I liked the story. Gyubei is my favorite. Nice job.

Hah, First reviewer! Anyway, I told you before, great fanfic. I really like the IchinoXKris relationship.