keep it up

oh yes you are evil. giving kikyo a livivg body. verry good choice. you are amazing that was awesome loving the story thus far i am about to read chapter two you are an amazing story writter

graet story! is that the end or is tehr egoign to be anotehr chapter.

great story. The ending could be better by giving Inuyasha, Kikyo, Miroku, Sango, & Kohaku their life back by Midoriko as a gift for releasing her. You could put this in the epilouge if you write one.

it was very nice i loved ur story is one of my favs now but it would be better if edit it and put at least something so we can tell when ur changing the scene. XD!!
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Oh my gosh!
that was AMAZING!
you should be a professional writer!

very cute!

awesome story i look forward to more

this was a competle success. Wonderful.
MORE. I Must Have More.

i am confused! it hasnt been 16 years! souta didnt age so how can kikyos child?

O_O IS THAT THE END?! Please tell me it's not!

good story ... very interesting idea ... I really liked it a lot

I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw that Kagome was merely a soul after making her wish ... that was so painful to see but Sesshomaru helping her was just the cream on top of the cake ;)

it was a great story

|~sayuri~|

I like...

awsomeness

Nice story, gotta look for more. You should read A love transending time i think it's called. Author is good like you. Later. Dragonlady80906