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Verity Brown
2005-07-29 . chapter 1
O, so this is very AU! I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Wallpaper
2005-07-29 . chapter 1
lovely opening, though when i read 'full moon', 'james and lily', 'die' and 'howl', then first person who comes to mind for me was Lupin.

so i got a little confused at the end when it was actuallys sirius, and didn't get it until i read it for the third time.

must be my half-asleep brain. Hm.

seriously. lovely opening. great description, loved this part: There he howls at the moon until it disappears below the horizon, replaced by the haze of early dawn.

nice job. looking forward to the next chapt.
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