Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: A Moment of Weakness - Reviews: Page 1 of 2

JovianJeff
2007-09-11
ch 1,
abuseThis was incredible! Not only a well written tale, but one I could so connect with having a variation happen in rl. Rodney sending for Teyla to help while he awkwardly tries to console Elizabeth, I was so there with him. I could also step back and enjoy a very good scene with characters from a beloved show. Both because they were written true to character. And then...lol, loved it!
fififolle
2006-09-23
ch 1,
abuseWow. How come I've never read this? Thank heavens for the Awards. I don't see how any of the others can be better than this, I really can't. Still, better check I guess. OMGosh, this was just such an adorkable fic - thanks!
Delka
2006-04-11
ch 1,
abuseAww. That showed a sweet side of him. Thanks!
mate
2005-09-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseit was so nice. so lovely.great job
Margaret
2005-08-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseWonderfully done. I love how Rodney was so awkward, but still kept trying. I think Elizabeth needed this, and it's too bad the show wouldn't give it to us.
Commodore Norrington
2005-08-23
ch 1,
abuseWonderful! A beautiful image, Rodney just holding Elizabeth. I love how you have her have to tell him what to say, but he turns it around and really means it. A great McWeir fic, really. Well, well done!
Dean's Celtic Pixie
2005-08-23
ch 1,
abuseThat was cute...I love it when someone shows that Rodney's got a caring side...that he's not *always* an arrogant **. =-)
peanut
2005-08-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh how lovely! It was so in-character to have Rodney act awkward in the beginning yet know exactly what to say to her when it was needed. And having him offer to go punch Simon (okay, he offered to have John do it) was quite funny.
Poor Elizabeth! I don't see her as one to let her emotions show either! So glad to know she has all these people she can depend on!

Great story! :)
potterfan2006
2005-08-04
ch 1,
abuseAww how sad (wipes tear from eye) i love fic's like this

potterfan2006
Fanwoman
2005-08-02
ch 1,
abuseThis was lovely! There was such a stronger sense closeness between these people in this than in any episode in season two so far. What happened between The Siege, Part I and Intruder? Did they all get their emotions reset to Rising?! Arg! These people are supposed to know and care about each other. Unlike season two so far, this really shows that. Thank you!

One little nitpick, though, if I may: Teyla doesn't use contractions.
nebbyJen
2005-08-02
ch 1,
abuseI loved this! It was great how Rodney attempted to comfort Elizabeth while sending Sheppard off for help. And Teyla's cure for the bad boyfriend, HA! What a hoot. Yep, loved this!
Beth-TauriChick
2005-07-31
ch 1,
abuseLoved it!! Great fic, nice McWeir friendship - maybe developing to something more later?? like a sequel?? Please? :) Anyway, it was a wonderful read that I thoroughly enjoyed :)
cybersyd42
2005-07-30
ch 1,
abusePoor Elizabeth (and poor Rodney!). I'm with Teyla on the revenge part!
szhismine
2005-07-29
ch 1,
abuseaw...

great fic!
rogue1503
2005-07-29
ch 1,
abuseI love what you did with this! - I love the way Rodney just became the most totally cool guy in his own skin, that is to say he knows he panics, therefore can see it in someone else, I always pick Rodney for someone who'll run for the hills in a difficult moment, and in this exact moment he was her rock, supportive, understanding and calming. I really liked the wait you wrote him. Sheppard to me was also in complete character - totally uncomfortable with a woman crying! But above all else I really loved the way you show these guys as a cohesive group, the four of them, all supportive of each other, trusting each other... They really have become a family of their own!
Return to Top