Great story, good flow and well bursting with intresting stuff.

please continue this story rocks so far, be intrested to see how it turns out.

I want to know who the mogul guy is, so by all means write plz write

A definite must read.

Great Story. Excellent.

Interesting. I look forward to more. Excellent use of imagery.

Cont. Please. Sounds intresting, and kewl. ;) Cheerio Cheerio