It was funny, witty and sweet. The best part was there was hardly any OOCness in it. Please write more of Finder stories...

Great story. Your character development is amazing. Your story seem like something you could read right off the manga. Look forward to reading your other works. Until next time, take care and god bless.

hahax... nice one...
The thoought of asami tricking akihito to move to his apartment
Nice chapter!

you should write more viewfinder fics

Yay this was a really nice story. I liked the way you wrote asami's character

One of the best viewfinder stories ive read.It was awsome. Must continue it! If there cn be a continuation

Poor 'Kito!! But at least he go Asami!! Muahhaha

WOW I've been looking for a viewfinder fanfiction for ages now!!

I really love this .. poor aki~kun he has it so tough ne?
hope you write more!!

~the mad onexx

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Don't tell me that this was a oneshot.
I really liked it. It was excellently written.