Thanks again dearie for the sweet moment between the determined Mistress Elisabeth and an out-matched man. Bovernor Swann would have had a chance only if...she entered convent(to be someone else's problem). The dialouge is fine, it brings 'em. Thanks for the hard work and more please.

Great father/daughter moment- even with the pirate tension. :)

Loved the way Jack was thrown into the mix. Very entertaining.

How old is Elizabeth, in this fic? She seems to talk like a young girl, and yet she knows about Jack Sparrow. Is that because she's heard of him through an obsession with piracy, or has she met him by this point?

Great!
Poor little Lizzy. Mind she remembered the 'Captain'...