 Xedra 2006-09-24 . chapter 4Wow, each story gave me a different feeling. The first had me all melty, the second had me all teary, the third made me laugh, and the last broke my heart. All wonderfully written - you're GOOD! |
 hokage 2005-12-07 . chapter 4 angsty chapter 4! i liked it!
and chapter 3 - with that teletubby looks - is very funny! hehe.. write more! |
 ffpanda 2005-11-22 . chapter 4These were excellent! I'll watch with anticipation for more!! |
 bitter green tea 2005-11-22 . chapter 4Ooh, I read the last 2 chapters on lj and I haven't had the chance to compliment your writing there, so I'll do it now. I love these drabbles and you did such a good job incorporating the themes in your fics. Chapter 4 is my favourite since there is so much tension, bitterness and raw hurt between the two, and yet underneath all of that mess of emotions there will always be love. Will be looking forward to reading more of your drabbles. |
 kuma-chan 2005-11-22 . chapter 4O! I REALLY liked that one! your others were good but that one was great! A little sad but really good! omedetou! >.o ja ne. kuma-chan |
 Ashcat 2005-11-22 . chapter 4Wow, that is such a powerful fic. I really enjoyed it and how you summarized their relationship! Great job - can't wait to read more! This could be the start of a really interesting story. |
 tangerine-asuka 2005-10-31 . chapter 3omg. I LOVE THIS! Read all 3 chapters... Chapter 1 was sweet, Chapter 2 was so angsty I almost cried, Chapter 3 is totally hilarious! Please do continue writing~ I wanna read more ^^ |
 lemonsucker 2005-10-30 . chapter 3lmao i loved that |
 dytabytes 2005-08-15 . chapter 2*gasp*
This is unbeta'd?
*_*
You're an amazing writer to have such great ... everything *swt*
Your characterisation is brilliant, and the dialogue sounds like it's straight from the manga
*nice girl pose*
You rock!
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Oh, and if you want a beta?
E-mail me at
X3
~Alicorn9 |
 thekatgrl 2005-08-13 . chapter 2Wow.. I really liked this. I've put a lot of thought into trying to understand the way Shuichi and Yuki work, as a couple, because the manga provides so little that it's just hard to wrap your head around sometimes, you know? But this story illustrated it brilliantly. Everything was spot-on, and I know I'm not expressing this well enough, but this was awesome. Thanks for helping me understand! |
 Heartless Writer 2005-08-11 . chapter 2i liked both of them. they go with the volumes quite well.
please continue. the later-on yuki is like this, trying to be different. =)
yuki. (ironic, yes i know) |
 Elfish Etyma 2005-08-11 . chapter 2So cute and sweet... so realistic too. That's what the most gripping thing is. I didn't review your last one, just put you on alert, but what can I say? I'm lazy. Though I did notice the mesely amount of reviews you've got for something so fantastic, and had the urge to tell you how wonderful you are.
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 Macmac 2005-08-11 . chapter 2 ehh...depressing. |
 Ashcat 2005-08-10 . chapter 1Cute but angsty :) Glad to see your writing gravitation again! |