That was a pleasant chapter. But why did 'runaway'?

I wasn't sure I'd like this but I really really do.

On a rather odd note, Shyzana reminds me of Mrs. Lovett, from Sweeney Todd and I'm not sure why. Perhaps its the way she talks. Either way, I love her just as I love Mrs. Lovett.

Anyway, enough with that little aside. I would be very, very interested in reading more of this. I hope there is more.

:D

Lillith

I agree that the chapter did seem kind of forced but I think that gave the whole awkward impression that the two seemed to be feeling. They both seem shy and everything so...it wasn't so bad.

Oh more of Shyzana's past...I wonder why she ran away if she lived with muggles. Did she go to hogwarts? hm please update soon!

Aww that was such a sweet chapter. Shyzana is so nice and Lupin is of course Lupin, always the gentleman. Good job. I am glad you didn't make her fall completely in love with him right away seeing as that would be a little too weird.

I am so bored that I decided to read another one of your fics. I am happy i did!

This is just too cute. She wants a father figure and she's going to get Lupin! I can just see it.

A very cute chapter. This story should definitely have more reviews if the first chapter is anything to go by. I'll read the next!

It's good so far! Update!

Oops, sorry, got your name wrong in that last post, Fallen Seraphim Azarael. Sorry!

What'd you mean, where are the other reviewers? I reviewed! *pout*

What you should be saying, Fallen Angel, is where are the next chapters? I've been looking for new ones for a week now! T.T;

TWENTY SEVEN YEARS OLD! Wow! He must've seriously been under stress to have grey at that age. So he's only ten years older than Shyzana...*evil plotting in progress*

I'm really enjoying this story! Intriguing, cute, and simply irresistable! Now where in bloody blazes are the other reviewers?

DON'T MAKE ME HUNT YOU DOWN REVIEWERS!

You know, I was just about to mention that you two seemed similar and then you wrote that Author's Note. You're making this Remus in his late 30's? Or am I just a touch messed right now? The grey flecks sort of changed my initial perspective on how this Remus was. But in any case I enjoyed this chapter also.

OH! And I'm SO glad you thought Erutis' room was Krayonish! It took me an hour to decide on it, and I kept sketching the room a thousand times... Anywho you weren't being a meenyhead for not reviewing. It's fine. I enjoy reviewing people's stories in general, and it doesn't matter too much if they don't read/review mine at all. I STILL can't believe it took me so long to read this one!

Ah HA! I FINALLY got around to reading and reviewing this story! *slaps self across face* In any case I got your reviews for 'Just What the Doctor Ordered.' Thank you so much! And Lisa... oh yes. She's sometimes a spot of bother, but mostly is subserviant to my every command... *pets Lisa* I believe you can buy one at any local slavery... you just need to pay and register your pet and ta da, your very own Lisa. ...Oops, sorry about that. Just felt like the right thing to do, informing the general public of such a useful pet. -_

Interesting name, Shyzana. Does it have any meaning? *is very interested* And Remus sounds sort of like a father figure, at least the way Shyzana thought out his voice. If I didn't know any better I would've agreed... lol.

Post another chapter soon! its great. Oh yeah, you know the part of the running away, maybe you should dedicate one chapter to explain why...

...the timing is screwed up. Because if Voldemort's gone, Harry's 17, and if Remus is 27, then James had Harry when he was 10...

Anyway. I liked.

Very well written. Keep the story going!

Squeenes. I like it! No, I love it! Hurry update soon!