LOL, yes Tohru! Throw the meat cleaver!

Hey! I love the story! Arpeggio told me about it over the phone and it was funny then and now!

Please continue with stories like this!

...Um, do you remember who I am? I would log in but it's not letting me right now... Go to Amaterasu-Sun-Goddess's site and find me, Loveisamysterybutwhy and read my profile to see who I am if you don't know... but then again I don't think your dense like Tohru.

I misses you! ♥_♥

I'm still signed in as Dai, oh no! *laughing* Sorry, And. It's Rin, not Dai. I hope she doesn't hate me for stealing her login for one little review. *tiptoes*

Anyways. It's been a long time since I've read this--I forgot how funny it was. *more of teh laughing* Heh heh heh... I can tell it's hella old. And you used "lol"! *is horrified*

Heh heh... 'tis a classic! You know, I think it might be a good idea to reupload it, though, and fix some of the little mistakes. Just a suggestion, though.

DON'T HATE ME! I'M NOT AGREEING WITH THE FLAMER, IT'S JUST...!! MY EDITOR-SELF IS TRYING TO TAKE OVER! *loud, flailing battle with inner editor-self; Author!Rin hits Editor!Rin over head with meat cleaver* Yayy! AH PWN JOO BYOTCH! *the late-night craze is setting in...*

Hey **, you suck.

Never, ever say Shigure squealed, you pathetic excuse for a human. *is mortally wounded and disgusted*

Look B I T C H! “NO!1” Kyo bellowed hotly. Do you not know how to use the shift button or something? It's not that hard. "Yeah!1" Rancorous bellowed hotly.

Enormous, gigantic paragraph in the middle. You must die for you, stupid twit.

You and your friends are retarded; what are you all, inbreds? Go and F U C K yourselves. 'Cause we know that no man EVER will.

Stop with the canon-sues. We all know that this is some pathetic daydream that you're having concerning you and hot guys, but honey, it is NEVER going to happen. To be honest, you'll probably scare them to commit suicide.

R/N: Oh it was long. Dreadfully long. See, I'm growing grey hairs. And you're dumb, like this S H I T you call story.

PS And your Luffy imitation sucks.

LOL! Very funny! I loved it! When you think about it what Torhu did was very smart. I would most likely throw a meat cleaver if some moron tryed to kill Kyo. Yet again very funny.

lol, yay for tohru's quick-yet-not so brilliant thinking! that was fun, nice work.

OMG that was great! That was so Fing great! Kyo almost got his head sliced in half by Tohru! OH NO! Kyo should be throwing it at Tohru, he's a better shot.

Teehee...Betcha dunno who I am! *coughs* Anyways...*laughs head off* Oh gosh, i love it. CATCH THE MEAT CLEAVER! lmfao

Wow...that was abrupt...lol...

Very interesting. Too bad it's a oneshot thing, though. It could be interesting if you decided to continue it. Like, Kyo's father is their enemy, and then he pulls off Kyo's bracelet...

...Oh no. See, I just finished reading tha volume of the manga when Tohru learns his secret, so now I'm crazy about it. ^_^

^_^

YAY! Wonderful! ^_^ Short 'n' sweet. ^_^

Bye! ^_^

(Mysteriously...)

wow. that was funny! but it's kinda sad at the same time, in a funny way.