this is the same 1 chaphter a " in my dreams "

pouts... it's over?
please update!

write more please

HA! I FOUND YOU!!
and you thought I'd never find your profile!
I am the co-author and since Mai is obviously not going to continue with the story as planned (since she lost the layout I gave her) I shall post it on my account, with longer chapters!!
and you down there (the one messing with my grammer) I know what the proper added thingies are o.k.! I'm studdying Japanese and own Manga and Anime. the chan was placed there purposfully so don't give me ** about this!!
okie I shall leave no
btw, the whole wet dream idea was mine!!XD

*Claps* I congradulate you. I like this Story...But I'd like it better if there was another chapter. Still...must'nt rush a good story. You did really good, Keep up the good work.

What... what... what?!!? You can so not end it there! I want more sex dammit! Haha, love the story by the way. They're such a cute pairing. ^_^ update soon!!

Ack! Where's the next chapter?! TT.TT Please update soon... *typical anime crying/whimpering thingy going on*

Nice! ^_^ But one word of advice: adding -chan at the end of a name is for when addressing young girls. The correct one you're looking for is -kun (pronounced 'koon') which is for 'little or young boys'. But mah! I love this manga, and I like what you have so far, too! ^.^ (is so dirty)

WOOT!! You must write more or I will hunt you down and make you suffer from my chibi assassins dancing. (limitedtimeofferoonlyfrommoonlistardestinybatteriesnotincluded) Okay...BWAHAHAHAHAH! Update son!
lovelovelovelovelove (OR ELSE),
moonlitStarDestiny

(OR ELSE!)

lol can't wait to read more

sque i so love please more i want hot scenes that i almost get6 a nose bleed from please ^_^

oi. hurry up with the second ch. and more sex hehe

LOL! I liked everything, even the little intro at the top. It was all good. And yes, I noticed about the little Mio and her girlfriend thing. There's hints >_

XD Hahaha! This made me laugh so hard! Good job! I like the ending. Poor Tak-kun! You'll get Kotarou **...in fanfiction! ^_^

Update soon okay.
My sisters sick dont listen to her I cant believe were twins.
HEY!
Snowball we have that telepathic communication (aka TC) I heard every thing you read while I was trying to read my book. DO YOU KNOW HOW ** ANNOYING THAT IS?!
Calm down your just cranky cause you didn't get enough sleep last night
Go suck yourself jackass!
Isn't that from book one of hands off, and your talking about me Ha!
The books no were near as depressing and perverted as this story.
Go too sleep I can feel your too sleepy to continue argueing with me
How I hope lightning hits you
Like you wont feel every bit of it we are twins after all
** Off **!
Thanks I am a female dog
At least I'm not a transvestite man **
Take that back you ** sucking loonitic
Egotistical flea brain ** face
** face evil ** loser
Scum bag off the seventh level of hell born to sexually molest three year olds
Dog killing bird hatin tea drinking buck tooth ** eyed mass murdirer
** roach lovin burger pickin ** jerkin cockamani rotting eye eating zombie **
Okay stop we could go on like this forever just agree that the story was good and then you can go to bed with out me bothering you
You bother me just living
Oh yeah your really tired cause even as mean as you dont say that to anybody even people were you just wonna rip out their guts. (Ebony aka the social statis **, Latoya aka class A fat trick , Felicia aka the crooked toothed **, all from school)
I may be sleepy but if I ever said that to them it would be after I pulled that giant ** stick from their rat asses and made them choke on it( Stupid ** whores I hate people who mess with me for no reason)
Woah did you actionally ever think about doing that
Hell yeah, wow were way off the point so any way I'll agree with you for tonight.
Good on 3...1,2,3
Together: We liked your story so update soon(snowball liked your story not me)