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| Evil Genius of the COCA 2007-12-06 ch 24,  | abuseMan... is it just me, or does everybody seem to liek snapping at Greg? Ah well, anyways, loved the story, can't wait to see the next chapter, cuz I need to see what's gonna happen with David Mile. Update soon please? Peace Out!~EG~ |
| EgealetBaby 2006-11-22 ch 23, anon. | abuseI've been reading all along and I love this story!! Keep it up and I think you could go a little futher with Sara and Nick's relationship. But as always it is your ultimate decision. |
| sherryw 2006-10-31 ch 23, | abuse*claps hands* Finally another chappie. Thanks for showing all of our kidnap victims it's nice to see what they are doing. I'm glad that Grissom and Greg are close to figuring this out. Looking forward to more. Update soon! |
| sandersfox 2006-08-14 ch 22, | abuseAH! no! my poor poor csi pepes!! this is so awesome! i think the griss what being kinda a basterd to greg but it is a really great story! |
| prpleflipnhippo 2006-07-20 ch 22, | abuseOmg you are a horrible, horrible person. Poor CSI's. I'm just kidding about you being horrible. you are not horrible, and I really enjoy the story.It is very interesting. |
| sherryw 2006-07-20 ch 22, | abuseAlright now we know what happened to all of them. Now it would be nice to have some Nicky in there. I'm missing my guy. Looking forward to the next update. |
| prpleflipnhippo 2006-07-13 ch 21, | abusethat is so cool. I'm really enjoying the story so far. I cant wait till the next chapter. Tootle loo. |
| sherryw 2006-07-04 ch 20, | abuseWoo hoo...writer's block has been unblocked. Looking forward to more chapters now. Can't wait to see where you are going with this. I'm hoping to see some Nick, Warrick and Sara in the coming chappies. We need some whumping going on. Update soon and no more writer's block allowed! LOL! |
| sherryw 2006-06-04 ch 19, | abuseThanks for another update. Hopefully we'll see another one soon. Looking forward to seeing some more Nick. It's bee a while. Update soon! |
| karmine 2006-05-01 ch 18, | abuseOMG! I loved this chapter! Hope ya update soon plz! I'm looking forward to it! ;D |
| Meygan Reyes303 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abusehey this is very brilliant can you please put another chappie up bye |
| Tsukasaru 2006-01-25 ch 17, | abuseI like it! Poor Greggo. People are so mean to him. xD Hope you update soon! |
| RadioacitveSquirrel 2006-01-25 ch 17, | abusei bet warrick just had to go to the bathroom |
| Dr. B. Shadow. 2006-01-23 ch 17, anon. | abuseHello, Just wanted to say you have a great story and I can't wait until you continue it! I have a feeling Warrick got kidnapped and that Greg is going to be in trouble with Gil with not giving the tape to him. And that Cath is about to get kidnapped though I have a feeling she's not just yet, but she is going to get a message from them again. Those are my guesses, they are wrong probably but I read so much I can kind of read the plot before it happens after reading the end of the chapter, but this one I can't think of what happens next really. I can't wait until you can continue it, it is really interesting. Sincerely, Dr. B. Shadow. |
| karmine 2006-01-22 ch 17, | abuseoh cliff hanger! plz update soon this story is great so far! |