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| Grey Faerie32 2007-06-25 ch 2, | abusethis story is excellent. please please please update it. i would love to see what happens. |
| Cestari 2006-12-18 ch 2, | abusePLEASE tell me if you ever plan to update again!! This is AMAZING! |
| kakashi-fan 2005-12-18 ch 2, | abuseiya! (no!) aoshi couldn't have killed misao! it was all a mistake! (also i know angrybee tries best to stay true to the RK canon!) so... i will wait patiently until you continue this story and tell us the details... |
| Artemis of the Ice 2005-12-10 ch 2, | abuseUm. *worship*? Truly, what else can I say? You're still the mistress of all that is twisting, Aoshi, and plot. |
| omasuoniwabanshi 2005-11-12 ch 2, | abuseI'm fascinated already and Aoshi isn't even really up and about yet. The idea of Aoshi as a serial child molester/killer is absurd, so I'm really looking forward to finding out how the mystery will be resolved. I can't really see him killing Misao either, but I can definitely see the police finding him mourning over her body and leaping to the wrong conclusion. Apart from Saitoh, the police portrayed in the RK anime aren't exactly mensa material! Angi was always a very sympathetic character. Of all the Juppon Gatana, he alone seemed to retain a shred of common decency despite his quest for retribution. I'm glad you aren't making him too perfect though. Showing his doubts and the ineffectiveness of his sutra chanting makes him more understandable and human. I like that you chose to use his P.O.V. It's working very well. The minor OCs are also interesting and well described. Good story so far! Write more soon! |
| Kasifya 2005-10-27 ch 2, | abuseYou will keep writing this story? Yes? It's very well done and I'd like to know what really happened to Misao. She isn't really dead is she? ~Kasi. |
| master apple 2005-10-22 ch 1, | abusethis is so awesome you must write more. I want to know what happens to Aoshi.I love the detail you bring to the story. peace out |
| Sailor-Earth13 2005-09-30 ch 2, | abuseAn interesting chapter. Wonder what is going on and what the heck happened to Misao?!? Please post the next chapter soon. |
| mimura no miko 19 2005-09-27 ch 2, | abusewhat? aoshi killed misao, the onw who loves him so much? has Aoshi lost it, i ask? if he has, he's transformed into a ninja "Battousai"... nice descrpition of the contacts! i love Kamatari's! still... undecided, isn't he? anyway, i hope you can finish this, so that i can print it all in one go! waiting for the next chapter, sincerely, mimura_no_miko-19 p.s. keep it up! ^_^ |
| Ellie 2005-09-14 ch 2, anon. | abuseXD I'm so glad you updated!! The whole premise of the story is cool, and your second chapter definitely does not disappoint. Besides all the interesting prison interactions... hm... I think it really deepens the whole mystery of what actually happened with Aoshi to have everything discovered from Anji's perspective. Also I like how you show Anji's hard efforts are to truly change, because that kind of thing can not be easy. And I am also very suspicious about the Ainu boy. I halfway thought it might be Soujirou, until I read about his eyes... (Ah, now I just want to read the next chapter!) |
| Lotus-chan 2005-09-01 ch 2, | abuseI'm really enjoying how this story is developing. You really managed to surprise me with the story Anji recalls about the rurouni who stayed with them a night. I'm eager to see how the other prisoners will take to Aoshi. That and Anji's (possible?) lack of continued animosity toward him, considering what they know he's in for. Once again, I love the historical accuracy and I look forward to your next update. |
| Brittanga 2005-08-30 ch 2, | abuseGreat story...I can't believe that something taking place inside a boring prison of all places could be so interesting. I can't wait for Anji to find out who really killed Misao and all those children...and for him to smoosh the evil murderer's head! |
| Brittanga 2005-08-30 ch 1, | abuseAww...very sweet. The last line, I mean. Torture and stuff isn't... I wanna know what Aoshi's doing in prison, too! I hope it was somehting like: "I killed someone to save [insert name]" |
| xZig-zagx 2005-08-30 ch 2, | abuseWhat a great story to find admist the crap on It's been a long time since I found a good one. I must say I thought the man would be Sano, not Aoshi, but I was happy to find a story that could also surprise me. And in this chapter I thought it was cute how you made Kenshin stop at Anji's in while wandering. Although I'm guess that boy (can't spell the name) the served the tea might me Misao in disguised. I'm just guessing. _> Can't wait for more! |
| Jannete 2005-08-30 ch 2, anon. | abuseGreat story! I love this Anji character. |