okay, i like it alright. but i could like it a lot more if you were a better writer. the story is mediocre, and the writing is horrible. sorry, i just felt i needed to say something.

hmm...interesting. I wonder what is going to happen next. I cant wait for the next chap.
TG

Love It :) Update soon please, wonderful work XOXO Dracos Lioness

crap dat sux...NO NOT THE STORY! i mean wut his dad did 2 him dat wuz cruel! plz let dere be a happy ending! update soon! ^_^

okay then, now its gettin good! I WANT A FIST FIGHT! PLEASE! WHY DOESN'T ANYONE BELIEVE ME WHEN I SAY THERE SHOULD BE A FIST FIGHT!?! FINE WUTEVER, JUST UPDATE SOON! XP

You should really update! PLEASE! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
Person Of A Strange Origin or POASO

very interesting chapter!! =D hope you can update soon!!
and the future ron has come?? that'll cause trouble!!
~~Erin~~

omg omg omg write more write more! its so good write more your killing me!

da da damn, cliffhangers are b*tches. lol I can't wait to see what happen's next.

PAMS(Please add more soon)

wow...its confussinng but its cool i like it

Great Plot! I have a bit of constructive critisism, if you don't want to here it, then don't read it, Though I have to say the overall plot is amazing!
1. They have cellphone service at Hogwarts? Wow! I guess thats not really important though.
2. Don't you think Hermione would be more serious about the fact Draco was a death eater, not, oh have fun torturing innocent muggles, as long as you don't hurt me and you love me.
3. Hermione would definately not ask Draco to kill Ron, even if he did hurt her. Even if she changed her mind.
4. Draco is very OOC.
Overall it is an amazing fic, but those four things really bothered me, I don't know why.

damn...harry's gonna be in truuble

Close to the end of the chapter draco said "'well first it was gonna be me and Blaise...sorry i correct myself. Blaise and I...'" Well thats wrong it would be Blaise and me. thought you might want to know.

wow..this story just absolutely captivated me..the time has flown to me but its only been 45 minutes! it is truly wonderful when a story can do this for me..please update asap!