So Zelda had Vaati's kid?! What the- SO HE WAS A RAPIST? AH! PROTECT ME! At least zelda had kids! Now she won't be lonely, since Link died. Hee hee! I loved this story! It was sad, romantic, funny and awesomely done! Thanks for making this!

LOL! I know it's sad but the way zelda killed vaati, i find highly amusing! I mean, she just left him hanging on the wall?! HA! HA! HA! HA! HA! But i'm so sad that Link died. Now i really feel bad for zelda! I wonder what the epilogue will be? Hee! Hee!

HUH?! YOU'RE BECOMING A MALINKER?! But...*pouts* Anyway, I can't believe zelda chopped off her finger! Yikes! I'm reading the next chapter!

YES! Link confessed his love for Zelda! I loved the part where where Vaati and Link were argueing. DOG-FIGHT!! XD Probably the best chapter so far!

i love that dramatic dialogue zelda gave! So moving! I still think she should just turn into sheik and kick vaati's @$$, but this is just as awesome! I can't wait for next chapter. Tee! Hee!

So cute! I loved when Link let zelda cry on him! I laughed when vaati caught them and called zelda 'love'.LOL what an idiot! This was a nice chapter!

WHAT?! LINK IS ALIVE!? That was a shocker! I'm thinking that he will team with zelda and fight vaati. Suprising chapter!

Darn it! Zelda got her memory erased! This will certainly muddy up things. I'm going to read the next chapter!

Very suspensful! The end of the chapter was a bit creepy. Does he follow her? O-O XD

Whoa! Vaati's a possessive freak. I wonder who's calling out to zelda? Is it Impa?

The dialogue is very clean. I like this! Fluffy scene when vaati kissed zelda... Great chapter!

Whoo! Zelda is stubborn! A good thing since vaati's a rapist. L0L! Just kidding!

Poor zelda! Link died because of vaati. D@mn that sorceror!

How can the author not be sure of his own story? Oh well weirder things have happened on this site.

Intresting fic but it was a little fast paced.


Link: NO!! I'm dead! (sobs)

Dink: (gives Link his respects) Author can I take over Link's positon now please?

Looks like Zelda is in the Hyrule version of SuperMax. She needs to call 1-800 I M SUICIDAL to get out of that phase.

Link: Finally I am back in the fic with my true love. Thank you Author and yes I hope she does call them. I don't like seeing my should-be wife wanting to end her life.




Dink: (Links Cousin) What about me? Can I be in the fic plese Kioasakka?

"I can make swords since I am a blacksmith and run a steady business over at Kakriko."

Link glares: "NO! Quit making a fool of yourself even though you are pretty good at it."

Dink: "Thanks for the comliment."

"also Dink how can you call a steady business when you are always behind in your work you lazy dufus. You never charge enough money for your swords so it's a wonder you stay in buisness at all and your lucky the landlord is lazy as well or you'd be out on the street.

"You don't take your career seriously" You might as well sell them for free!"

Dink: "Shut up I can make the price any amount I wish under the freedom of buisness act and I'll worry about how I run my store." :P

Link: "With Vaati in charge that may not last much longer."

*Growls at Link and threatens to rip him apart*

Kioasakka: "Please stop arguing you two and stop spamming my review board. Thanks"

Link and Dink: Okay. *Dissapears and continues the argument in the Sacred Realm*