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| tribebohemian 2006-05-28 ch 1, | abusethe end? the END! are you kidding me? how can that be the end? even if you're continuing with another story, how can that be the end of this story? it wasn't even a proper ending. it doesn't stand by itself. ok, i'm glad you're continuing with another story but, i just don't think this stands as a single story. it's more like part one of a story. oh well, guess i'll be looking for the continuing saga |
| tribebohemian 2006-02-12 ch 12, | abuseliking the update. the story is well laid out and the heir of danger definately eminent. will they ever make it out of there? my only regret is your chapters are too short :) |
| G-LADY 2005-12-23 ch 12, | abuseYOU STORY IS WORTH PUBLISHING MORE OF. I REALLY ENJOYED IT. IT WAS HARDTO STOP SO I COULD DO MY HOUSE WORK AND SHOP FOR CHRISTMAS DINNER.PLEASE CONTINUE I'LL BE WAITING.NOT MUCH TO DO HERE IN TEXAS USA. VERY COLD. I LOVE TO READ. THANK YOU FOR SHAREING YOUR STOUY WITH ME. I FEEL GREAT. I AM A BIG FAN OF THE TRIBE.MY GRAND KIDS JUST LAUGH AT ME. THANKS AGAIN DIANN |
| tribebohemian 2005-09-21 ch 10, | abusei've been waiting for an update...thank you. still well written. the caves sound very cool and you describe them well. they dont sound generic. my heart was like pounding. cuz i thought they were safe but i should have known the gulls would come after them. is this more of a story about stealth and lex? not like that's a bad thing. they're both written to perfection. i'm really liking this story and can't wit to read more. keep up the good work :) and thanks for my email..real cool of you |
| tribebohemian 2005-09-15 ch 8, | abusethis is awesome. it has to be the best post tribe five story i've read so far and i've read plenty. great idea showing the mallrat arrival from another perspective. i like stealth, she's a wonderful character. hawk too. you're descriptions are well done and dialogue realistic. you've got lex nailed down solid (he's a favorite character). just the right amount of description of the scenery around them. i felt like i was there but not so much that i was swallowed up by it. i was scared they wouldn't get away. i hope the rest of the tribe is okay. and i think the names are cool and well thought out... for the most part. hawk and the gulls aren't exactly original considering they come from the show but i don't think their corny. besides, even if they were, the tribe had plenty of cheesy names. the technos for example. anyway, can't wait to see what happens next. :) |
| VedGirl1201 2005-08-11 ch 1, | abusePretty good. But work on the names! They are so corny! |