Really cute. ^^ Let's spread the KiruKura love, ne?

KYA! >_<

So kawaii!!
Make anotha one!!
Please??

i love you~ i love your fic~ this is really a kirukura rulez ! XD

Kla-chan, I have to tell you this...it's one of your most stupidiest stories ever! Because...you didn't write it longer! Man, something as 'exciting' as that should say more. anyways, nice one-shot. I wish I could write somehting like that...(shiff)...it's great!

^_^ so cute... I like it ^_^ reallt nice o-o i want that chocolate >u< jajaja... ^_^u well, nice shonen-ai ^_^. hope that you're ok, Take care and Bye-Bye.

Hmm...fine for a start...but, really, you'd need to check on the spelling. This line:

"...the novel he had just bought in piece and quiet..."

Do you have any idea what you had just made me think when I first read the sentence? I actually thought that Kurapika had bought a book tore into pieces, and had patiently spend...like, I dunno how many hours rearranging the pieces...whoa, Kurapika must have been desperate for that book if this was the case. Anyway, that was what I thought before I saw the word "quiet" and figured that what you were trying to say was "peace and quiet". Please, please, do proof-read first, okay?
That is more or less what I have to say, but one more thing:

"...his eyes caught the big bowl that Killua held. The assassin sat in front of the television, opening it in the process, and digging into..."

Opening? Opening what? I did not know that we can actually open a bowl. Or is this some kind of new technology that I had not been exposed to yet?
Right, I guess that's all. Excuse my sarcasm before this, and please, do try harder. Practice makes perfect.

so

sweet thank you

good try

so nice

keep trying