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TexasJen
2008-04-20
ch 1,
abuseThis was so damn funny! I loved this the best...

Eric kinda chuckled. Leave it to Ryan to use proper words like '**.

It made me laugh out loud. Great job with it, I wish you wrote more often!
inzaghina
2008-04-07
ch 1,
abuseThis was absolutely awsome.
And Ryan is so cute, I would have gone inside the story to hug him, really!
The ending was love, with Eric trying to convince himself he's the one that wears the pannts in the ralationship.. adorable!
Going to my faves.
christiangirliemiranda
2008-03-31
ch 1,
abuseI loved it! How funny was it that Ryan caught them!
TwistedSister03
2007-12-17
ch 1,
abusethat was amazing! loved the end very funny =]
brainfear
2007-09-05
ch 1,
abuseThat was freakin' hilarious! *And* freakin' hot! I had a good laugh with Ryan. He seemed so traumatized. Actually, Calleigh and Eric getting it on would be hot. What's his problem?!! Hehe.
csimiamifreako
2007-08-21
ch 1,
abuseHAHA! LOL! RYAN IS HILARIOUS! HEY, I DONT BLAME HIM, IF I EVER SAW SOMEONE DOING THAT (ESPECIALLY ON MY CAR, WELL FUTURE CAR) I WOULD DO MORE THAN THAT, I WOULD PROBABLY JUST SCREAM, REALLY LOUD, LIKE THIS, AH!

LOL! GREAT STORY, CALLIEGH IS SO FUNNY, AND APPARENTLY, INTEMIDATING!


ERIC+CALLIEGH=AWESOMNESS!!
ukgurl17
2007-07-22
ch 1,
abuselol poor ryan, and poor eric and calleigh lol
is there going to be more? maybe horatio next time could catch them lol
great story :)
FashionIsLove
2007-07-18
ch 1,
abuseI love it! So hot! hahaha! This is so funny too! Ryan is just so meticulous with his things! hahaha! Man, Eric just cant seem to resist, can he? hahaha! love it!
BulletGirl2647
2006-12-28
ch 1,
abuseHaha omg, ROTFL. Poor Ryan. He named his car? Haha. I loved it. Hilarious. Except for one thing. Anybody would wanna ** Ryan! :] Seriously. He's like way better-looking than Eric. Lol. Again. nice one-shot. :]] I liked the end too.
SincerelyInDenial
2006-11-16
ch 1,
abuseDios mio! That was so incredibly hot and funny all at the same time. Poor Ryan! This was very well written and I could just visualize the entire story with the descriptions you provided. Great job!
Transgenic-girl
2006-02-19
ch 1,
abuseWow! *laughter* What can I say? I just loved it. Poor Ryan. And, ah, Delko's such the push over.
Prisilas
2006-01-28
ch 1,
abuseOh wow.
I love all your CSI: Miami works
It's fabulous
Keep it up
I can't wait to read more
heartagram69
2005-10-02
ch 1,
abusehey its heartagram69 from talkCSI i had allready read this fic and wasnt sure if i had reveiwed if not im sorry but am now, lol.

i luv it!
Daisyangel
2005-08-09
ch 1,
abuseOh that was priceless. I absolutely loved this fic and Ryan freeking out was so funny.
Jayne
2005-08-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseMAN! Fecking Ryan!! WHY??! *sobs*
Great smut... loving it! Keep up the good work :D
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