Ah, that was beautifully written. So much emotion, very real and aware. I'd love it if you would do more with it, but you ended it very well all the same. Excellent!

Cool very passionate. shows true relationship between matt and tai

Why'd you stop it? IT was getting good. Don't ever stop a fic on a cliffie. Hmph. At least have an epilouge or something...

OMG i would give anything to be able to write a story like this one u must write more and more and more. Well my story cant compare to yours but if u like u can read it (Why Me by Kico Yushimi)
well singing off this is Kico _ later

aw so sad(at some point)...very good!

I love it!

Mistal

peace

I'd LOVE to read more, but I can't offer you any ideas! *wails* because I have none! But I do hope you can come up with something adn write a new chapter soon, Ja!

well you ask us what do we want... and i have the answer... WE WANT MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!YAY! MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!...

sorry, got trailed off.. guess it might be a lil late (2:50 am) and im just slipping away... gnight..

MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!

luv... baby.chan

OKAY! Definitely the last fic of the night...and definitely bed time. Its friggin two fourteen in the morning. Well planned out fic, well written fic...angsty angst angst angst *licks lips* just the way centi likes it. AND TAITO on top of that. WHOOT! Poor poor yamato *huggles* so violent and self destructive...poor poor takeru...well we'll just leave that unsaid...poor poor Taichi...trying so desperately to help his yama...needless to say *yawns* it was enough to keep me up another half hour ne? Its hard to read a fic when random letters appear in korean...stupid font reader thingy...and when crazy drunk australians are making you lose your place. G'NIGHT! WRITE MORE...AND I'LL ADD THIS TO MY FAVE STORIES! *huggles* BAIZ!

Awww...that was so angsty and sweet! An excellent start to your Taito-ness! I liked the way you told it from Matt and Tai's POVs and the motif of falling running through the story. You have improved since though, this has a lot of summarising in and your description's better now. But it was still cool!

Omg, a good story for a change, other then the sickening taito. Don't think I'm a homophobe, I like yaoi even though I'm not gay, but taito just makes me...*shivers* have...panic attacks! Wait, that wasn't appropriate.

Okay, you probably think I'm a total psycho so I am going to be quiet now. But it was a good fic. Unlike some other ones you've wrote. That wasn't appropriate either...

keep writing, good story

*singsong* Mo-ore!

YES! I WANT YOU TO CONTINUE PLEASE THAT WAS TO GOOD OF A STOREY "DONT FALL" I LOVED IT IT WAS SO REAL PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

please more

i like fic

it good

Beautiful. ;_; I know I felt a few tears after reading this. Very nicely writeen. Nice play of emotion.