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Wicked Enough 2005-08-25 ch 1,	abuse(smacks herself How could I not have caught the fact that you have new one-shots til now? The stupidity of this author almost makes me want to become a n00b and use random Japanese.) eyes wide in amazement Wow. Once again you have shocked me with the intensity of your words, of how easily you can capture a moment by just using a few phrases and turn it into a picture. I especially liked how you used the numbers-it's an effective way to seperate each scene while still remaining artistic. As the dark-smut lover I am, how could I not enjoy the last part? "...the ink on his hands." That was THE touch. The ending sentence that helped turn this from extraordinary to genius. What makes me sad is the thought that in the end, the only person who truly got hurt was Sakura--an unavoidable but tragic moment. Well, please keep writing, and I'll be sure to keep looking forward to your works! I love them! PS: Thank you so much for your continuous support in Shattered Minds! Sadly enough (growls) Your review for the last chapter was cut of again, so I didn't get to read about your full reaction to the Orochimaru scene. >.< Argh, and that part was written especially with you in mind, too! Ah well, it was still fun seeing the beginning of how you felt about it! PPS: You have taken my Author Alert List virginity. I've never felt the need to use this function before, but I can't miss another one of your wonderful works! :)
Chibified Eyes 2005-08-01 ch 1,	abuseOmg, I love this story. Really good atmosphere and the countdown idea is really good
Peliqua 2005-07-31 ch 1,	abuseToo good. Too good. TOO GOOD. AGH too good. Amazing. Imagery-sogood. Exactly how the series should go.
psychedelic aya 2005-07-30 ch 1,	abuseThat. Was. So. Good. The atmosphere you did was so well placed--poor Sakura, though; although I admired her here, honest to her feelings and yet the same time confused--:D It was really good. :D

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