Lol. That was kind of, in a stragne way, funny. Not a bad start and it seems kind of intersting. Update soon. Laters!

~Unforgivable Horror~
~Dark Anime Love~

wow! kaoru has a special ability, is she the only one possessing it or does this skill pass on their bloodlines? anyway... chap.2 is great! hope you continue writing... eventhough school will start on aug.10, update soon ok!

hey tenshi! it's me again!...shumi!
"sorrows" is great, but i think this fanfic(embraced love) is better than sorrows,
well i love both... just continue it ok... update soon!
anyway... will tenshi show up in this fanfic? is she ken-san's sister? well if yes... than were SISTERS!

~ja! ^_^

I enjoyed this story so far so I hope you get a chance to update it sometime soon.