I get it but then I don't get it...

Poor Severus! You did a really great job of showing his inner torment.
G.S.1307

Would you be willing to have this story hosted at http://hp-writers-guild. ? It's particularly well-written, and I'd like to be able to get other people reading your work.

brill cant wate for the next update

...weird... but pretty good... I er.. think =D

Lol, this was a really good one. I feel sorry for Snape in both the fics of yours that I've read. The other is still my favorite thought. It had more action. ^_~ Anyways, this was good and I hope you keep writing HP slash! ^^

Oh dear! Poor Severus - tormented child! Nice characterization, I felt; we haven't really seen much of Severus' past in canon, have we?