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| Paosheep 2008-03-30 ch 1,  | abuseI really liked this. Just thought you should know. |
| CherryBlossoms38 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseI loved it (and your use of parethesis). I, too, have written a similar story to this. It's called Mistakes. Read it if you want (but its not as good as yours) I loved the drama! Great job. You're an excellent writter! |
| Optimistic Pessimist 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseit's sad *sob* i cry...good job too! |
| winged wondergirl 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseI love this story, even though its sad. |
| The Graceless Jedi 2007-04-28 ch 1, | abuseI liked it! But its so sad... Sakura's my favorite character. T_T Somebody needs to beat some sense into Sasuke. |
| HannahSakura.Pinoy 2006-12-29 ch 1, | abuseI've read this before a long time ago when I wasn't writing fics yet. It's absolutely wonderful. I've always wanted Sakura to be hit by their jutsus. But of course, I didn't want her to die. |
| EroSenninLuva 2006-12-18 ch 1, | abuseWow that was really sad. Ahh Kaka-sensei was dead...mwah. good job |
| Japyra 2006-12-09 ch 1, | abuseVery tragic, but quite good. |
| mesame 2006-07-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseYES SHE DIED...i..i mean aw omg i hate it when naruto cries omg it makes my stomach hurt and with sasuke too ur so creul!! LOL J/P I LIKE THIS STROY |
| the yellow ribbon project 2006-07-06 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was breathtakingly beautiful. Extremely well-written and heartbreakingly tragic. I loved every minute of it. Simply amazing. (adds to favs) |
| Darkofthenight 2006-06-11 ch 1, | abuseOh wow...that was breathtakingly beautiful. It made me tear up completely and cry like one hell of a baby. I really love it, and I completely think you did a wonderful job, it was a gorgeous one-shot. Really great job. |
| Obscurity-Wind-Wolf 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuseo_o O_O ... Deep. -faints- |
| desolate butterfly 2006-04-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is a really great story. My only problem was that at one point you refer to Sasuke's Sharingan and its "commas" which kind of broke the mood for me. It's nothing serious, I'm just used to hearing them called "tomoe" and I had to stop and think for a moment because "commas" threw me off. But I got sucked right back in to the story right away. Your sense of drama is spectacular! ^_^ |
| Blizzie-chan 2006-03-22 ch 1, | abuseWa! That was so sad! *starts crying and grabs her Sasuke plushie* No! Sakura died! Poor Naruto and Sasuke! ...Still loved your story though! |
| kinokokichigai 2006-01-30 ch 1, | abuseyes! it's a mind** story! *bows in worship* |