Reviews for Two Worlds Combined
EchoMizuki 5/26/13 . chapter 89
Hey! Keep up the good work! I love the story so far!
hyllia14 5/4/13 . chapter 45
XD yay Kratos earned his first (and probably last) hug from Carlotte!
hyllia14 5/1/13 . chapter 17
Small problem, on a part it uses the phrase used for a guy.

other than that? I'm hooked.
Guest 4/4/13 . chapter 8
i love this
Whatsername Blah 2/19/13 . chapter 89
Whoa, a very pleasant surprise to see an update of this. I've been rereading the earlier chapters, and holy crap have you improved a LOT as a writer. I suppose that's to be expected- you were like thirteen when you started this, and I'm guessing you're twenty or so now. It's really interesting to see the evolution from chapter to chapter.

Also, 18,201 words until you hit a million of them. Holy crapmuffins, that is impressive.
LimeTC 1/30/13 . chapter 50
you gave themmmmm
blood
blood
bottles of the stuff
gave them more than they could drink
and it will never be enough
you gave them blood
blood
bllllllllllllloooooooooooooo ooooooouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu udddddddddddd
Guest 1/28/13 . chapter 89
this fanfic is utter shit...

kidding!

is actually great!
LimeTC 1/20/13 . chapter 46
awwww i loved that chapter so much!
Yoline Nimai 1/1/13 . chapter 89
Thank you so much for the update! It made my day!
I know it must be difficult for you to continue writing about TOS after all this time, so thanks for not abandonning that incredible story.
Happy New Year! We are not dead, so cheers XD
Lunatic Pandora1 12/30/12 . chapter 89
OMG! I'd totally forgotten I had this fic saved in my alerts, so happy it's not dead!

Now I really need to hunt down another copy of ToS for myself, though...
Ereneviana 12/28/12 . chapter 89
Amazing chapter, as always!
Guest 12/26/12 . chapter 89
Oh my god... I love you.

So much.

Seriously.
alex.rushing.5 12/24/12 . chapter 89
I.. Thought this was dead or on hiatus for a long while.. Thank you for continuing it. Thank you.

Poor Sheena.
Miyavilurver 12/23/12 . chapter 89
Oh man Im so happy to see this update! I started watching you because of this story, and then I got into your wonderful world of Clockwork. Didn't think you would be updating this again but I am pleasantly surprised 3 Love this chapter! Hope you make more of this at some point
Dee Dee 12/23/12 . chapter 89
Great as always. :)

My only complaint is I feel that Charlotte and the others should
be better friends at this point. I feel like they don't like her as much
as many months of travel would warrant, no matter how complainy
or crass she might be, "they" in particular being the Sylvarant side.
It almost feels as if they are just tolerating her presence, which I find offputting.

Other than that, well written and sassy. I find Charlotte likable as usual.
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