Ooh! Cool chapter, I really liked it, you should definatley continue! x

I like this, I thought Ari was really spiffy. Hope you update soon.

Yay! lol, Ainne... XD wow. Sorry, Hon. But you lost me half way through... for a little while anyway. Then I went back and finished it. I'm not really into Star Wars but I decided to read it anyway... cause you're my favorite. ^_^

Ari is a little too perfect if you ask me. now, don't go getting me wrong, i loved where this story is going and all, i just thought i'd give you some feeback (hopefully it'll be helpful, and besides, you did ask for it). maybe if she has some big weakness that most people don't have any problem with (ex: paralyzing fear of bugs, faints at sight of blood... etc) that could help tone her down a little. anway, great story, and please continue soon.

All I can say is you must have a ton of imagination to redo Kotor with a new character the whole way. Go with it--hell why not? But don't change your pen name unless you really want to. What you have now is just fine and if you remind me of Mission, it is because you are sweet, not because you share her name.

I'm not so sure about this story. I always love Atton/Exile stuff, but I don't get used to new characters quickly. I'll keep up with it though. I'll read anything. :D