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| darkmistress in the shadows 2006-12-11 ch 30, | abuseThis story had so many twists and awesome things in it. It was such a good story and I loved it all the way through. I had just stumbled across it. You are a very good writer. |
| Rose 2006-11-09 ch 30, anon. | abuseIt's me too lazy to log in but had to tell you I liked the epilouge better than last chapt, liked it a lot especially how you represented Vic & how you showed what happened to them all. |
| RhiannonUK 2006-11-04 ch 30, | abuseThanks for the epilogue. You wrapped up all those lose ends nicely. The idea of Victor finding God (in W: The End) always struck me as - huh? But you've done justice to that. I've loved every word, every line, every chapter of this story. Thank you for all that hard work. Rhia. |
| OroroHowlett 2006-11-03 ch 30, | abuseIt took a long time for this to end and sometimes I didn't know where you were going witht his but it wasn't bad at all. It was a very good ending for every one. |
| Isis Aurora Tomoe 2006-11-02 ch 30, | abuseYES! HAPPY ENDING! Great chapter! I really like how you added Mystique, Graydon, and Kurt's maternal parentage. As always, great job, and I can't wait to read more from you! |
| IMHO Nienna 2006-09-15 ch 29, | abuseI started not to review this but aft reading it again I really liked it. It was kind of a nice way to end it with strife and friction after what they did so even tho theres a kinda fuzzy warm ending I think it works. So where's the epi? |
| RhiannonUK 2006-09-12 ch 29, | abuseAnd they lived (mostly) happily ever after. Grin. I'm almost sorry this story is now ended - except for perhaps an epilogue which I'll look forward to. Hopefully you'll be girding your loins for the next story. Didn't you say something about pure RoLo? I'd like to see that. Thanks for all the work you put into this. You do RoLo to perfection even when it seems Marvel can't (still can't believe they did what they did, damn them!) Sublime work, lady. Truly sublime. :0) |
| OroroHowlett@yahoo.com 2006-09-11 ch 29, anon. | abuseWow! U updated so soon and its a happy ending or maybe its a bittersweet ending but I like it all the same! |
| Isis Aurora Tomoe 2006-09-11 ch 29, | abuse*sniffles* Yes! Happy ending! I loved the way you ended it! Everyone was happy, and thriving, and although it was sad that Ororo miscarried, she and Logan ended up doing quite well. Yet another RoLo gem from you, dear Darlin'. Can't wait for the next one! |
| OroroHowlett 2006-09-10 ch 28, | abuseWow! This story has been full of interesting predicaments and I'm glad to see you still working on this with quicker updates! |
| Isis Aurora Tomoe 2006-09-10 ch 28, | abuseWow...That was unexpected...I wish I could write a really glowing review, but I'm a little speechless...Just know that I really enjoyed this chapter, a lot. Now I have to go put my jaw back in place...lol. You know you did a SPLENDERIFOUS job! |
| IMHO Nienna 2006-09-09 ch 28, | abuseSo now I see how it's gonna be now Vic's the bad guy and this is gonna be another Rolo! Ok so it's a good chapt few mistakes no biggy but Rolo? Again? It's all you write and I thought you'd try something else here oh well bring on the end so I can see how its gonna end and keep writing girl. |
| RhiannonUK 2006-09-09 ch 28, | abuseWill someone please kick 'Ro's arse right now? What the hell is wrong with that girl? Another damn good chappie. I'm hoping this story arrives at the right conclusion. It will, won't it? Thanks for the update, Darlin. And so soon after the last one too. Your hard work under adverse conditions is greatly appreciated. :0) |
| Isis Aurora Tomoe 2006-08-20 ch 27, | abuseAll I can say is... 'woop woop'! I'm so excited that you posted a new chapter! And even though it was not beta'ed, it was still damn good. I'm sorry about your dilemma, but don't worry, everything is going to be fine, right? You take care of yourself...don't know where you stand on religion, but I'm praying for you. |
| IMHO Nienna 2006-08-18 ch 27, | abuseOk I'm not going to get into the mistakes cause you didn't have a beta and you're usually ok but what's up with the 14 at the bottom of story? I'm gonna have to tell you YOU TOOK FREAKING FOREVER TO UPDATE THIS and what are you doing to Victor?! You know I like your stories a lot a whole lot really and you're one of the few authors who write Storm like she's got sense but what are you doing girl? Seriously?? Except for a whole lot of questions and not knowing what Storm's going to do which is kind of good in a way I'm not so sure if I'm liking this any more or as much as before but it could be cause you didn't update in like forever! You made Victor into a freaking ahole and I love Victor!! I love this story for the most part but it's gonna be a rolo isn't it? >:( |