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| truelycharmed 2008-06-02 ch 18, anon. | abuseFor your last chapter you should write about cole,pep and phoebe and the decissin pep has to make about vanquising her dad...and how does pep have orbing powers? |
| JoBroHSMfanatic 2008-02-23 ch 18, | abusePlease continue writing this! |
| piper14798 2007-08-09 ch 18, | abuseI love this story i hope that you update soon i love it and i hope that there is more cole |
| The Eromancer 2006-10-22 ch 1, | abuseya know for a change how about instead of always having Harry and his group of teenagers meating up witht eh second generation of Halliwells and goign threw all HIS adventures, ya change it up a bit, eh? Ya know like sometime AFTER Harry gets done with the whole Voldemort Issue and he just wants to get away so he moves to America and loo and behold... ends up moving in next to the Halliwells! I'm sure you could potentialy sneek him into ANY of the seasons and put him into any of the pairings. Just change up a few things here and there to fit how he does magic in with the Charmed series and wala! instant perfect storyline. WHY CAN'T PEOPLE THINK TO DO THIS?!?!?!?! I'M TIRED OF SEEING THE SECOND OR CURRENT GENERATION GOING TO HOGWARTS... IT'S!! BORING!! AND "OVERUSED"! |
| VampireWizard 2006-02-21 ch 18, | abuseWhat was that! no no! the story so far was great! no! dont you dare stop it now! please, you can make voldemory attack the Charemd family! please finish the story! |
| VampireWizard 2006-02-19 ch 12, | abuseThis is a really nice story so far, but i think that they will just keep on kissing till someone sopts them. and, you can not kill Piper becasue she is the main character for the Charmed. plus, check your grammar mistakes, there is a few of them. And Please read my story! |
| VampireWizard 2006-02-19 ch 7, | abuseThis is a really nice story so far, it sound like as if u r J.K. Rowling, just to beg, can u read my story. it's called "A help from a friend can't cure a cold" |
| Haleigh h. 2006-02-04 ch 18, anon. | abuseI agree with your decision. Pep acts like a **! |
| Cybervampire 2006-01-28 ch 3, anon. | abusereally cool but i thought chris could blow things up too. didn't he sort of blow leo up at the end of season 5? |
| bkaym 2005-12-22 ch 8, | abuseOkay i have only been able to read the first 8 chapters but i have to say i'm loving this story. keep up the good work. |
| Halliwell-Charmed 2005-12-22 ch 18, | abusegr im giving u evils for stoping |
| jenna 2005-12-22 ch 18, anon. | abusewell just wanted to tell you that its good that you canceled cuz the story wasn't going anywhere at the begining that was good- but when you get pep unto the story and it was all about her was really boring and that's just sad cuz i think that you have potential and if your next story will be a Charmed / Harry Potter cross so maybe you should get chris as a main character cuz everybody know him or even wyatt and whrite funny situations- cuz that just screaming to whrite a funny story when there involved chris with his sarcacm and the cross between the two worlds and i can promise you that would be a great fanfic. i want you to know what i wrote at the beginning of my very long review wasn't to be mean or something but just to give you an advise well that's it and i'll be waiting for your new story and i wish it would be better good luck! |
| Embry 2005-09-27 ch 18, anon. | abuse1.Piper 2.Harry 3.I want to say Chris because that would be a lil more drama (student teacher thing) but all the girl teacher are really old and thast's gross so i'm gunna say Paige |
| amythestpony 2005-09-27 ch 18, | abuseI love this story! TO answer your questions Pep is mostly like Prue, with hints of paige in her. I think that Ron is most likely to cheat, but he wouldn't do it intentionally to hurt hermione. Pheobe and Paige will find ROmance with teachers. Snape/Pheobe or Snape/Paige, if you choose to bring Cole and PHeobe together. Update soon please, and did I mention that I love this story? |
| damien455 2005-09-27 ch 18, | abuselol got me all excited for a new chapter. cant wait for the next chapter! hmm..im gonna ponder these polls and see what happens! |