So Here I am. I'm french and my englich sucks. But I love reading in english, especially your fanfiction. I love Future genuise. I love you. ...

Yes I'm joking.

But still I LUVE everything you wrote. So just try to figure out how pissed I became when I find out that your last update was in march 2007. HELLO, we're in 2008. (5 minutes later) Emhem, sorry, I 've just read that it was in december 2007 So it's not so awful. Sorry. HOWEVER, I'm still pissed. And I will forever be if you don't update until 2009. I know, try to GET A LIFE. but please, could you wrote another chapter? I would REALLY be happier than when I got the last Harry Potter. (°°) Ok, less happy but does it matter? ^^ THank you for all your wonderful stories, you are very talented.

PS I KNOW, I've juste written this in your SHOUTBOX.

PPS Oh, and my favourite character is ... Haruko. Don't know why. If she was real, I think I would dislike her in fact.
Fav pairing? (like you even care ^^) CHIDO HARUKO! too weird?

PS this review was useless.

PS Oh I have a critique. I don't think tenten would let her daughter be a housewife, I mean, in Naruto, she is the one who support woman indepedency, who always says a woman can be the best ninja. So impossible.
As far Gin is concerned, the AMBU stuff is possible but HOW did she manage to become a jounin if she didn't know anything? Did everyone fall in love with her?

Howdy,

I first have to say that you named all these characters very good names. Like Jia Li; I would picture a very strong will - narrowed minded kind of person. Which is what Jia Li is. So I have to give you congrats on that.

Second, I have fallen in love with Jia Li and Akimoto pairing. :]

Third, I think since your such a great writer that maybe you should try and expand the story. Maybe challenge yourself and play around with the length. Just a suggestion really!!

Any ways, you have a great story and I hope you update soon.

SCENEx

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I'd hate to have Lee as my father...*shudders*

*dances around* YAY! AN UPDATE! SORRY FOR THE LATE REVIEW!

Huh, well, I didn't really read all your original story, but 'tis really good in my opinion...besides the fact that I don't like boyXboy...

This chappie didn't suck TO bad. Way better then whatever crap I write.

That wasn't that bad! I think it was nice to know how Gai's feels about his father and everything. So, it's cool! Maybe someday, he'll understand about his father!

*pats* I liked the chapter. :) I had wanted to see Lee's wife for a while now. I'm a sucker for family bonding moments.

I actually enjoyed this chapter. What i do like about your characters is that they are not "perfect" neither their lifes are, but they I are well built and willing. You can't blame Lee for trying to teach his children his own techniques, no matter how "unorthodox" they may seem. I think Gai should try to understand him, like his mother suggested. And I also like Kameko. She is like an arbitrator in all of this. Especially between Gay and Toyo. I actually think she is the only one who understands Gai, or who at least tries. I think Gai should try to give her some credit for that.
(I hope you don't mind me writing my opinion like,if so I am sorry)
I am interested in the Festival, I'd like a description there -smiles-

OMG! You finally updated! I think I'm gonna cry...xD Lol, jking. Well, not really, since I was really looking forward to this chapter. I don't think it was bad at all! I find it interesting (and amusing) that the enthusiastic Lee's son is not-so-enthusiastic. Lol, Akimoto is cool too. I like that he's surprisingly "normal", instead of being cold-hearted like his father was. But personally my fave character is Jia Li...'cause she's cool and she's the daughter of Neji and Tenten. xD I'm curious to see what you've planned for the three characters...I'll definitely be looking forward to the next chapter!

this is really good perfect grammar good ideeas also excellent description i mean in battle scenes good individualized characters my respects to you writers like you make my day

Wow. I read your story and I'm blown away. It's so...real...I feel like I enter the world of the shinobi when I read each of your chapters. You are a very talented writer, or a writer that works hard, whatever, but you are AWESOME!

Gah, I love this story to bits and pieces! @_@ you're such a talented writer...I check my e-mails every day to see if you've updated...But no rush, quality is better than quantity, right? xD (noo idea where that came from) Anyways, this chapter was quite funny. I'm already beginning to root for a pairing! AkimotoXJia Li, of course! As if that's unexpected. xP Well, I'm curious to see what happens in the upcoming "festival"...cuz I have a feeling something's gonna happen! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!

lol~Tsuya sounds so aggravating...XD
i hope that Akimoto and Jia Li get together...eventually...
plz update soon!! =D

“I’d rather have HISOKI as a sister in law then you!” snapped Haruko, crossing her arms.

“I hope you’re just joking,” said Hisoki.
ROFL~i just find that hilarious XD

I really like it and that Lok really does have some problems ^_^

either way it was really good i hope you update really soon.

Luv it luv it please update soon Plz!

HURRY UP AND MAKE THE OTHER CHAPTERS QUICKLY, PLEASE! By the way nice story.