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Reviews For: No Longer Pretend - Reviews: Page 1 of 4

Onyx-Jade
2008-08-24
ch 1,
abuseHeartbraking story, the way you created the atmosphere surrounding them is incredible... You write in an amazing way, never stop!
totalromantic123
2007-12-03
ch 1,
abusei love this. it is so romantic! good job
mentarisenja
2007-10-10
ch 1,
abusethis story so totally fit the draco-hermione story : who they were. did you making it in the same time ?
Sandra
2007-08-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was heartbreaking; it made me cry.

~Sandy
ProphetWithAGun
2007-04-21
ch 1,
abuseHow could you do that to me? How could you make me cry like that?

You're a horrible person.

And I love this story.
ALittleSelfish
2006-12-22
ch 1,
abuseFabulous story! It was a perfect and awesome story to read that I could of read forever with a pit in my heart for Harry & Pansy.
Prytania
2006-12-19
ch 1,
abusemy heart is breaking for this couple.

-prytania
m
2006-10-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseupdate please
mandy-jg
2006-09-23
ch 1,
abuseThat was beautiful! Words fail me, but I loved that. :)
Fidelius Charm
2006-07-16
ch 1,
abuseWow. Just wow.
TequilaKiss
2006-04-14
ch 1,
abuseGahh...I'm crying..AGAIN! I just stopped from one of your other stories! And grr...Frigg.. tonight is so gonna be a crying night..

Very well written. Enjoyed it even though it made me cry like a big fat baby.

-wipes tears from eyes-

TK
eve
2006-03-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseGreat! U're really fantastic! I'm almost crying..one of the most beautiful H/P i've ever red!
ceylon
2006-03-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseA great but sad short story full of intrigue and sorrow that even a grown person would cry. I recommend it to people who are in love but don't want to admit such a thing. Frivolous to the fact that they are hurting...
Paalam,
ice
Apathetic Empath2
2006-03-09
ch 1,
abuseI can't talk. I'm crying my eyes out right now. Maybe its because I'm on my period, but my God, Pansy and Harry pairings have always seemed more tragic to me than Draco/Hermione. I don't know why but they do and omg, I can't type anymore cuz I can't see the screen

This was excellent.
A.E.
weepies
2006-01-11
ch 1,
abuseOh, my god. This was just too heartbreaking. I absolutely loved it, especially the D/Hr snippet, I was crying. :) *loves* Keep writing!
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