Good story, I really enjoyed it. One thing I noticed however was the last sentance...

"Harry and Ginny moved into their home at Godric’s Hollow where they later raised nine children, an even mixture of boys and girls."

If they had nine children and it was an even mixture of boys and girls, does that mean one was a he/she? Because for it to be even it would be four and a half boys and four and a half girls...

I'm keeping this window open as I go so I can touch upon all the items of the chapter I enjoy. First of all, I want to say (write?) that I really enjoy this story. I like Ron taking the time to study. I like Harry making Dobby his personal house-elf, and his thought about wanting to have asked Ginny about it. The mismatched socks idea is cute. Giving Kreacher to the Dursley's made me laugh. That's so funny and I really think they'll get along. Umm, well, as best as they can, which is not at all.I like Harry's eloquence in explaining how he feels about Ginny to Hermione. I like the bit about the optometrist.

With nine children, how does one get an "even mixture of boys and girls"?

i read this story in a day and i must say it was good not as good as some others but then again i have read almost every story out there. i just want to say one theng you fallowed through on every topis/subject. i was disappointed because i thought you were going to forgot about the the dress but you didn't so thank you for a very complete story.

Laurae

"Harry and Ginny moved into their home at Godric’s Hollow where they later raised nine children, an even mixture of boys and girls."

- anything strike you as odd about your last line?

Thanks for not spending time on the Yule Ball. It's an insipid idea that writers use because they can't think of anything orginal. Your story is creative, so please don't fall into cliche writing!

Shouldn't Harry be mad about Hermione forcing her wishes upon him. She just butted in on what he was doing. She didn't ask and he told her no several times. This is what I don't like about Hermione. She has no consideration that anybody is else is right. She's never wrong!. You had her apolgize at the begining of your story. You should have her do it again. And her parents are wrong in this case, too.

Loads of fun, plenty of excitement, lots of Love. Well written. Thanks for all your hard work.

I loved the battle scene. I was reading this on Simply Undeniable, but just HAD to come here and finish it. After that cliff-hanger you left over there, there was absolutely no way I wasnt going to read it here.

I loved that Neville was the one to kill Voldemort. HERBOLOGY being the 'power he knows not' I love it!

Loved this chapter. Probably wont review on the next. Its been a brilliant story.

Tricia

Hey! I've been reading your story and so far I think it is amazing, I just wanted to mention one thing: the plural or animagus is actually animagi not animagusses... thanks!

Harry seems a little out classed in battle. I mean, come on, you imply that he and Neville are very good and then he does this? Bumbling fool...

Your Neville sure sweems to be getting mad and ordering people around a lot. This just doesn't seem very "Neville."

You wouldn't happen to be an Eddie Izzard fan would you??
I love that the American Cavalry came in late...

Manda

p.s. Amazing story by the way, it took me 5 hours to read it, and that includes all the distractions.

brilliant story! good plot and all...and ooh you read david eddings didn't you? ;) heh the dryads... n the reference to fairies living only when people believed in them...i came across that somewhere before too... you've really done an excellent job weaving everything together so neatly. and yes although i was a bit sad that harry didn't get to play hero but it was a good twist that made your story more realistic (despite it's magical fantasy nature) *winks* :) a simple life does have its pros. overall, all i can say is, "absolutely charming!"

if they had 9 children how was it a even mix of boys and girls, just curious, very good story i really enjoyed it