So I'm absolutely loving this. But I've noticed that in this version Lorne's first name is Marcus. I haven't checked out the second version yet, but did you change it to Evan? Not that it makes a huge difference.

This story is so much fun! I really love it. The email format is a very interesting one to have used and you are doing so with great success. Great story!

ohmigosh i can't breathe i'm laughing so hard! :D

roflmao

You know what's scarier? I'm a Seahawks fan. I still believe that SuperBowl was rigged. Gr...

I love it! You've got all of the characters down pat; even the memos that aren't funny are still good. I also like the assorted references to Monty Python, Star Wars, Star Trek, and The Princess Bride.
More please!

LOL!

"6) There is no rule #6"

Aw, it's over? I've been sitting here clicking page after page. Absolutely loved this, very interesting way to write a story.
Will there be more to this story, I wonder? It's been quite a while since it's been updated; just looked at your main page, been awhile since you've posted. =/ Hope real life backs off a bit and lets you play on Atlantis again. =)

did I mention I love Carson? did I mention I love "your" Carson? :)

aw, man, you're killing me! :)

lol. now, that Klingon line there... crap, I need air...

yay, you brought Lorne in. I love Lorne. *does the happy dance like all idiotic Lorne fangirls, complete with pom poms and all*

aw, I love it when Shep's orders "backfire" like that :)

lol. last one - "Feel free to claim it anytime" - that was the best. but Rodney being his overly-scared and slightly hipochondriacal self? that's a close follower...

Ohmygod! this is HILARIOUS! awesome! and the added bonus of a Skinner reference? major kudos!

These are funny. The only complaint that I have is that Ronon isn't talking like himself. Keep responses to under 3 syllables.