Cute.

very cute, very funny. love it. except... RON WILSON! sorry. that sort of thing bugs me a little.

-Arnold-

A very interesting view into the Sky High universe.

A: Interesting...but what is the point?

review the characters names, "popsicle" doesn't cut it.

the movie kinda explained the whole theme of the story

But hey, no Mary Sue's!

E: Fun.

This gave me a giggle. I like it.

This has a really easy voice to it. It might be fun to continue this as a fuller story... besides, you're one of the the few good writer's who have submitted to this category. It would be good to see more from you!

The format was perfect, and the point of view was hysterical. "(I'm a prophet, not a grammarian)". And yet, your grammar is nigh perfect. I now thank you from the bottom of my heart, because I'm sick of seeing insensible stories due to spelling and grammar. :]

I'm really interested in seeing where you go with this, and since someone else already pointed out that it's "Ron Wilson", I'm not going to bother. Also...didn't Warren address Ethan as "Popsicle" when he cause Speed to go all whirly down the hallway? I can't remember.

Anyway, I can't wait to see where this goes. It's gorgeous! *bounces*. Oh, and the JLA comment cracked me up. Then my mind was all "ooh, is Wonder Woman there", and then I had to stop before I hurt myself. Lol, anyway, I can't wait to see where you take it. So please update soon!

aweshome. *claps* ay ay ay i lurve it on the first chap and thats a rarity for me.

whee... quick note... is Lash gonna be in this story? *giggle*

stretchy men... ah.

keep up good une work, update soon!

ce mois pluis!

i hope other people write sky high fics

I like your style of writing. You know the characters well. I just saw the movie recently. Very good. (Maybe I'll add a story of my own to this new catergorie.)

:)

Interesting...goodish...but interesting...

Excellent! I love the "random person" narration/take on the characters! Kudos for the very first "Sky High" fanfiction!

yay! go "hero support"! yay robin! go sidekicks! go little guys who dont get any credit when they usually do a lot of the work! YAY!

awesome!

That was funny. Short, a little simple...but funny. Anyways, I'm surprised this was the only Sky high fic, but it did just come out...Feel like co-writing another one with me?

Yay! A Sky High piece. I'm usually over in Harry Potter land, but I saw the movie yesterday and was hoping someone had started writing. Cute piece ... I like the newspaper-column style.

One fix ... bus driver Ron -Wilson- ... I'd missed where Ethan (I was thinking of calling him 'Slick' after what he did to Flash (?)) was called 'Popsicle' anywhere, but I can't say he wasn't. Well, I need to go see it a second time. :-)

Anyway, nice one-shot.

the-dreamer