This was heart braking...

"But deep down he sensed that this was the last time she would come here..."

So sad... Donna can never stop loving Josh even though he has passed... I take it she married Sam right?...

JENNIFER

It made me cry. The writing is very quiet and nice, and it's not based in the reality of how things turned out, but it is a very good piece of what it could have been, and ultimately, it made me cry. Read it. Everybody needs to cry now and then.

Don't do that! No! It's wrong!

Very interesting. I liked it a lot.

Absolutely wonderful. I almost cried at the end. I love the end though, it is sweet. Keep up the writing...Maybe you should write a piece on how Sam and Donna got together. Maybe as a squel to this one. Maybe how Sam feels about Donna visiting the grave.

That's terrible! Not the bad kind of terrible mind you, just the heart wrenching kind. That was too sad. Who did she marry? Toby?

That was buetiful tears and cheers i loved it

This was nice. We've been seeing a more serious Donna on the show lately, and we've gotten a taste of her serious voice. . . and this piece captures it wonderfully. That last line was a zinger, though; I mean, I can see it happening, but it still made me have to read it a second time around. Anyway, good job on this fic, I enjoyed it.

That was touching in many ways. I thought that, considering that Donna has never had a really sentimental speech like that on the show, you did a very good job of writing her dialogue. I have to say, though, if the ending was supposed to be a surprise, I had figured it out long before then (only because I am in love with Joshua Lyman and I am an obsessive angst fan.) The real kicker was... Donna and Sam? I mean, I figured them only because of the line you had about Josh's death bringing them closer together, and Donna and Sam were Josh's closest friends, but DONNA AND SAM? [laughs] Sacriledge! Donna is supposed to commit suicide ala Romeo and Juliet! [laughs] Just kidding. Nice story.