LOVE IT! Can't wait til the next chapter!

O! I luv it! You kept everyone in-character! I can't wait 'till the next chapter!!

Umm. I'm really sorry, I would have given To Own One's Heart to you, but Akira Of The Twilight asked for it first..You can take The Girl At The Library or Ulterior Motives if you want. Those are the only ones that haven't been taken yet...Just tell me if you want one..

-TrickyRabbit

WRITE MORE! Hehe. I love KyouxTohru pairings.

I Agree with Kay-Chan about keeping everyone in character. I can't wait to see more in this story. The ending promises an interesting next chapter *Shigure-like smile*

I like...Kyo was pretty foward about this situation. You should continue with this story, It's pretty good so far... I love Kyo and Tohru as a pair. Bye!

This was a good start, but in your profile didn't it say you were going to work on one story and one story only until it was finished?

I will admit to being hesitant about reading this because I'm not much of a KaguraxYuki fan. Actually I'm not much of a Kagura fan period. *black aura covers Akira*

Mimi: Um... K-Kir-Kira-chan...why do you look like that?

May: *anger mark* The ** has entered one her moods, and it's even stronger now because her friend called her two days ago giving her Fruits Basket spoilers about Kagura, Yuki, Shigure, and Akito. Needless to say the Kagura spoilers only made her grow more hateful towards the boar.

Akira: ... *smiles* I'm okay now.

You seemed to get the characters' personalities right. Though Hiro felt a bit off. He sounded more suspicious than arrogant and didn't come off as a smartass. I'll be waiting for you to update this and all your other fics I read.

Mimi: If you take offense to the Hiro comment Akira's sorry. She just loves that guy so much and it's all because of his attitude.

May: *goes back to building a bomb* She only likes him because she herself has an attitude problem.

Mimi: *blink, blink* Really?

May: *more anger marks* SHUT UP! I'm working here! *goes back to working on bomb*