Lovin' it! I am amazed at the detail, thankfully for the key at the beginning, otherwise I would be lost1 Onward towards the next chapter!

Wow... this is a great story so far! You keep things lively and interesting, like you don't know where Xyra is from but you do know that she is trying to get home. Great job!

yayy.. very original. I'm sick.. it sucks. I blew chunks to no end last night very messy. I'll be back at school tomorrow though. I'll have so much work to make up, homework in Greek vocab test in Greek, homework in Algebra (we might have a test I have to make up).And then I have a test in photography I'll have to do as soon as I get back, and I miss ryan! I haven't seen him in two days. Boohoo.

Well adios

Dani

Oh so good. Rawwl she is like a lion. Ddr you are crazy monkey. See you at school tomorrow.

This is brilliant, but it dosn't explain who Xyra is. The captain likes her tea and Xyra like her cofee. All and all the thing are interesting and becomeing clearer and clearer.

Callie

Yippee! (LOL, did I spell that right?) Another great chapter...hehe, I love it how you pick on Jim (like when he nearly fell off the Jib boom). I always look forwards to reading this! UPDATE soon!

Go Jandalz! wohoo! this is a random story (good random) LOL U hav 2 rite more...or i'll kic your jandalic $$

Excellent story! I love new TP stories, and this one is quite refreshing. Keep it up and update soon!

excellent i love it please please continue

Aw, I love the songs they're awsome. I also love the little pocet dohicky. A cliffie, horror of horrors. You are a Little Mermaid lost at see.

Deep in the hundred acre woods

where Christopher Robin played

Ther was a bear in the neighborhood

through Christopher's childhood days

One fish two fish

red fish blue fish

Wallow in dreams

can't sleep at night

everythins falling

everythings failing

don't want to put up a fight

wallow in nightmares

then everything will be all right

you'll see things the way they are

you'll see things from a far

spread your wings and take flight

wallow in life

This is such a pleasant surprise after a hard day. I love your description of Doppler. A social retard...yes, that fits. Nice job and a beautiful long chapter. I egerly await more. tp-gurl

Yay, a new Treasure Planet story. Wow! That was a very long chapter, but good none the less. Xyra, interesting name. I can't wait to see what comes next. Eagerly awaiting more,

tp-gurl

Oh brilliant, real brilliant. Lovely details and I like this Xyra character very much. You know the parts of a ship to which makes this even better. Yay, keep up the good work.

Callie

P.S. Are you buisy Friday... beach 1:00. :) Yeppers!

Too lazy to sign in *sigh*

Anyway, I really love this fic! I saw treasure planet a while back, so I really need to re-watch it now, lol. Update soon, k?