 Alerix Slynn 9/6/10 . chapter 15This was a beautiful and intricate story that I read from start to end without pause. I do apologize for not reveiwing every chapter but I just couldnt stop.
really great work I was amazed that you were able to keep the interest and high standard through the entire thing.
Well done! |
 Potterworm 6/26/09 . chapter 2This is a great chapter, but from an editorial perspective, it needs a bit of work. You switch tenses A LOT in this chapter. |
 Potterworm 6/24/09 . chapter 15This is one of your best stories. It was intense and dramatic, and the description of the pain was so real, I could feel the tingling. You're a phenomenal writer, and if anyone doubts it, they should read this story. |
 Frisco 10/3/08 . chapter 15I enjoyed this - lots of great whump and friendship. |
 PrincessLillibet 8/15/08 . chapter 15 wow. just.. wow. that was brilliant. "but he could still hear the devil laughing" i loved that bit. it is a really effective way to end a chapter, to tie them together and give the reader that sense of hopelessness I imagine he feels. |
 timme 5/26/08 . chapter 1 6 days is a bit much. of course its' still going to be dangerous! i'm surprised the team didn't just say screw weir and went anyway. |
 Dugleik 10/4/07 . chapter 15I'm speachless. Love the story. |
 mrskeeler 1/23/07 . chapter 15I had been scouring for my daily dose of Shep whump, when I decided I just had to read Red Sun yet again. I have to say this is one the best whump fics I have ever had the pleasuer of reading.
The friendship, pain and despair was portrayed perfectly.
Thanks for an excellent read. :) |
 shywalk 12/6/06 . chapter 1514 I was crying...sobbing...you hurt me in a good way LOL
Great great story |
 Splitbeak 7/3/06 . chapter 15Oh how I love this story. |
 princessangelwings 3/31/06 . chapter 15i love it when you go sheppard whumping- you do it so well! really enjoyed this story, especially when the recovery go so wrong. roll on more shep whumping! vbg |
 Stealth Dragon 3/17/06 . chapter 15Oh, this was good. Freakin' 'should be an episode good'. Man, it almost had me crying. Totally sweet, it's going to the favorites. |
 Delka 2/8/06 . chapter 15 Bravo! |
 Marion Rositer 1/4/06 . chapter 15 Your story is totally sadistic! If I had known that it was a drug addict story, I would never have started to read it. Whumping is one thing but outright abuse is another!
SHAMEFUL! : ( |
 TheNaggingCube 11/29/05 . chapter 15took me a while to get my monitor to stop being blurry... that was an intense and awesome ride.
the friendships ... made my heart ache with the depth.
well done. |