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Alerix Slynn 9/6/10 . chapter 15
This was a beautiful and intricate story that I read from start to end without pause. I do apologize for not reveiwing every chapter but I just couldnt stop.

really great work I was amazed that you were able to keep the interest and high standard through the entire thing.

Well done!
Potterworm 6/26/09 . chapter 2
This is a great chapter, but from an editorial perspective, it needs a bit of work. You switch tenses A LOT in this chapter.
Potterworm 6/24/09 . chapter 15
This is one of your best stories. It was intense and dramatic, and the description of the pain was so real, I could feel the tingling. You're a phenomenal writer, and if anyone doubts it, they should read this story.
Frisco 10/3/08 . chapter 15
I enjoyed this - lots of great whump and friendship.
PrincessLillibet 8/15/08 . chapter 15
wow. just.. wow. that was brilliant. "but he could still hear the devil laughing" i loved that bit. it is a really effective way to end a chapter, to tie them together and give the reader that sense of hopelessness I imagine he feels.
timme 5/26/08 . chapter 1
6 days is a bit much. of course its' still going to be dangerous! i'm surprised the team didn't just say screw weir and went anyway.
Dugleik 10/4/07 . chapter 15
I'm speachless. Love the story.
mrskeeler 1/23/07 . chapter 15
I had been scouring for my daily dose of Shep whump, when I decided I just had to read Red Sun yet again. I have to say this is one the best whump fics I have ever had the pleasuer of reading.

The friendship, pain and despair was portrayed perfectly.

Thanks for an excellent read. :)
shywalk 12/6/06 . chapter 15
14 I was crying...sobbing...you hurt me in a good way LOL

Great great story
Splitbeak 7/3/06 . chapter 15
Oh how I love this story.
princessangelwings 3/31/06 . chapter 15
i love it when you go sheppard whumping- you do it so well! really enjoyed this story, especially when the recovery go so wrong. roll on more shep whumping! vbg
Stealth Dragon 3/17/06 . chapter 15
Oh, this was good. Freakin' 'should be an episode good'. Man, it almost had me crying. Totally sweet, it's going to the favorites.
Delka 2/8/06 . chapter 15
Bravo!
Marion Rositer 1/4/06 . chapter 15
Your story is totally sadistic! If I had known that it was a drug addict story, I would never have started to read it. Whumping is one thing but outright abuse is another!

SHAMEFUL! : (
TheNaggingCube 11/29/05 . chapter 15
took me a while to get my monitor to stop being blurry... that was an intense and awesome ride.

the friendships ... made my heart ache with the depth.

well done.
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