How beautiful! Poetry has a way of making everything seem just a bit more romantic. Athrun and Kira are so sweet together.

*Giggles* So cute!!

I really liked it! it was beautiful. I didn't kno they were so... poetic. jejeje And don't worry i love this pairing, so i give u all my support. Please continue writing, you have a great talent. And thanx for making a wonderful fanfic. XD!

That was just so sweet

all i can do is repeat Kira's words.

"absolutely beautiful..."

Augh, you have so much talent for description that I could wail out loud. It's beautiful. Best example of it so far is the way you've described Athrun's handwriting: "His handwriting was neat, almost clipped, as though tightly confined within certain, narrow lines. He grimaced at the severity of the shapes." Not many people take time to focus on details like that while they're writing, but that's the sort of thing that makes a piece amazing. And not many people have that talent naturally; they have to work for it. For you it just seems to come with ease. A writer of many talents. Also, good poetry is another hard thing to master. I should know, I've been failing at it for years xP

This was great. Now stop feeling guilty for wanting to pair Kira and Athrun up. SEED has such a deep storyline, it practically begs for slash fanfiction. x3

Aw! How sweet!

Hm, you won't see me complaining about the pairing.. Quite frankly, the only pairings I will read are Kira x Athrun and Yzak x Dearka.. I don't mind Cagalli or Lacus but they get in the way of my boys..

I like Kira's part of a poem too.. You could almost hook them together except I don't think emerald has anything to do with the moon..

Hello! That was not as good Forever, My song but it was cute!! ^.^

?THEY'RE GAY?

WELL BYE BYE!

Wow, that was the sweetest story I've ever read.

Wow, this is a beautiful story. So well written, and beautifully described.
I love it.

Sweet ^^...

This story was just so sweet...and now my mind is in a repeat, "Aww...Aww...Aww...They're so CUTE!"

Err, yeah, ^^; The poetry was nice, if not, a tad bit strange (Yes, I know what Shakespearean sonnet is but...I don't know...-shrugs- It's probably nothing.) And one thing popped into my mind...I suppose they're writing in semi-darkness?

Anyway, Great story!

~Spyrit

nice!

Normally...I really don't like yaoi...but, I have to admit you did well with this one. I was a bit surprised when I saw first a review (which, thank you for) and then this. I was beginning to wonder what had happened to oh so delightful Carmen? *raises brow* Well, now that I know that your alive and well...lol, I'll leave it at that, no pressure or anything seriously for your other fics, I know how frustrating writers block can be, and having people at you constantly to update? *shakes head* No respect...*thoughtful look* or maybe a lot...huh. I'm rambling. Anyways, good going.
Storm