man if you haven't told mee that this was your first fanfiction i would have believe this was your 20th it was awsome and really good i loved it!

that was a REALLY good fic!

This is REALLY interseting to me, the new legend, the whole Danny-Sam-Ash Triangle. This is looking like the Ultimate Fanfic!
Advice to Danny: have you gone pass the phase where you abuse your powers? Too Bad... you should really get that Ash!
Question: why'd you pick the name Ash anyway?

This story was so awsome!! I cant wait to
read the next one:D

By far, this is probally one of the best Danny Phantom Fanfics I've ever read. The story had a great sense of imagery and used a vocabulary that was easy to understand for people in the teen-age group which it was rated. Personaly, I though the she blananced the right amount of humor, action/fight-scenes, and love just well enough to get a good story, but not to dwell on one thing over and over again.
The charatures that are not Butch Harman's (Ash, in example)
seemed to have a life of their own with interesting personalities and histores.
When I read the first chapter on a DP-fan forums last year, I was hooked. Come the aniversery of reading the story, I decided to search for it once more...and I'm glad I did!
If Butch Hartman where ever to create a book filled with fan-stories, this would defianlty be one I'd like to see in it.
I appologise for lack of critic in this review; I like the story a bit to much to find anything worthy to being crammed in here.

Woh...AMAZING!! This was...so cool! What a great idea. I found it pretty ironic that Danny got ice powers AND can shoot icicles from his hands. Once again great story.
hamanor12

i love this story...u think the problems r over, then i mean, wow, i read it a whila ago but i decided to review now cause its just so good...
FAVES*
rainblackroses14

Wow, great story!

Fav!

HEY i LOVED IT

Hey i loved the story! you gave me a good reason to stay ont he computer 8 hours. Once youve made the sequence of this one or a new one can ya send me the link? I love your wrighting!(SORRY IF I MISSPELED THAT WORD OR ANY OTHER!) Thank you!

Love the epilogue as much as the story! So that's why Vlad did it... I was wondering... And that last part was extremely cute! *luvs it to bits* Hmm, next story... which I'll start reading... probably tonight. ;) Um, it's a prequel, right?

Anyways, awesome story! Obviously already got on my favourite stories list and got you on my favourite authors list and author alert. ^^ If that doesn't say it, I'll say it in actual words: You are an AWESOME writer! Never stop writing! 'twould be a shame!

~Fey

Nyaww! That was so cute! Yay for DxS! XD Anyway, Sam finally used psychology on him - knew there was a part of him that would listen. I really didn't even realize until you pointed it out though that Sam could be the girl either way, whether it was Danny or Ash. Completely passed me by, that did. And I was thrilled to hear her finally set it straight for the guys. I'm actually kinda surprised she didn't think to say that before. It would have definately negated Danny from the position of the boy in the story. Oh well. It was great the way it turned out none the less! I'll go on to read the epilogue now. :)

~Fey

In Danny's words: "Still not reaking!" Yeah, I love how you incorporated TUE with the story. It completely fits, which is, of course, a wonderful little addition. And now I see what you meant when you said that you'd make Danny stronger than he appeared to be before - adding the ghost shield was a nice touch indeed ^^ And all the other stuff as well. Anyway, on to the next chapter!

(And yes, I'm sneaking in some time to finish this story... I can't concentrate on anything cause my mind keeps comign back to it ^^; )

~Fey

Mucho loving of this chapter! Yes, I snuck back to read more... It's hard to stay away! Tucker's a hero! Heh. And Danny's there... although I think if Sam wasn't so argumentative they may have had enough time to get out of there. Oh well, can't wait to see what happens next (though class is going to make me)!

~Fey

Okay, I'm really going to go to sleep now but first... Awesomeness! Ash has a split personality! (Sort of) Poor Sam has finally realized how much Danny cares for her. And I was kinda hoping that Ash didn't know about Danny's powers but I guess I can't really be surprised. He was, after all, stalking them. So, it was Vlad who went and trapped him away? Wonder why? And I can't wait to see Tucker's side story as well. Tucker's not my favourite character, but the way you write him (which is completely in character, btw) really has me wanting to hear his story too! Anyway, I'll see if I can finish reading this soon, though my next few days are looking very busy... Well, I hope.

Till then,
~Fey