sad ending, written like a masterpiece. wow. i could cry..

nice. can i please use teh idea of holly a ** in my story? please? please? please? please?

wow... holly as a **... wow. good job! is it done? i hope not! what happens to the other girls? does holly stay with arty? or is she completely broken? i want to know more! more i tell you.

Cool

I think you're wasting a good story... everything is just too cliche and straightforward to me, and I'm sorry to say that it just gets worse with every chapter.

this was amazing!!

well it was obvious to me.

Les Mes. cool!

I'm reading the story still but I just noticed that

My My My, it's been a while. I must say, you are indeed, at times, way to ** yourself :).
Your wonderful touch is still there.. Good job. Must feel amazing to finally have this off your shoulders ne?
To be honest, I think this is probably the best ending you could put for a story with this particular plot..and emotions..and characters..and circumstances.
Although the wording of Hollys ending speech and Keaira's ''cliche'' idea is a bit here and there, one cant really blame you for rurshing through - its quite a complicated idea to work with.

Anyway, thanks the update - i was beginning to worry that you may have forgotten us little people :P. Looking forward to your comming attractions over in the Naruto fandom, so to say.
Much love and luck to you my dear!

P.S. --Excellent choice of lyrical quotation at the end there the the Killers..funny, I was just listening to that song while reading :)

great. FINISH IT QUICKLY.

ok...wow... nice ending lol. i liked it a lot. but you could've made it more detailed and realistic. maybe a bit more drawn out too. good work though

Thank you for finishing this story. I've loved reading it. A new approach to most A/H stories but you handled it well. Lovely descriptions/emotions. Perhaps a little bit too convenient with Keaira's impersonation and death but still beautifully drawn emotions.

Please update soon! You're leaving me hanging!
Your fellow coin shipper,
S'Eleene Paris

plea please please please make them make up!

I can't wait for the next chapter! This is one of the most high quality Artemis and Holly fics I've ever read! Beauteous!! Continue do!!