wow, this was a great chapter! i have a strong sense of foreboding from this... please update soon, i want to know what happens next!

Personally, I have never liked the Guinevere & Lancelot have an affair plot. No one really understands what something like that really does to a person...It's hurtful and cruel, not something you should indulge in. But that is just my opinion.

I really do like the way you portray Lancelot's character. Everyone else makes him seem shallow and just plain annoying. This was different and I rather enjoyed it.

THIS IS NOT A FLAME! You are a really great writer and I urge you to go on with this story! Best of luck,

Mariannie

please keep going! it's cruel to leave us hanging like this!

more more more!

This story is great so far cant wait for more!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

I hope this is going to be a lancelot/guenivire (or something or the sort) kind of story! i've read a couple others but you're a far better writer than those so i look forward to reading more soon-

Anya

I like this story so far, keep going. Who's being paired though?